| Reviews for Las Vegas and Death |
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   willam and jack and jake chapter 12 . 10/3 cool |
| HairyLimey chapter 12 . 10/1 More please :-) |
| Baboy Ako chapter 12 . 9/24 I am a little confused, as there appears to be some discrepancies between chapters 11 an 12. Mrs. Weasley picked up the girls and they told most of the Weasley family what was going on in Chapter 11. Now Mr. Weasley picks them up and the Weasley family doesn't know. ? On the other handkeep up the good work.. I am looking forward to see how you are going to bring this all together. |
| god of all chapter 12 . 9/22 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| god of all chapter 12 . 9/22 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Stephen chapter 11 . 7/12 What Happened After That And Please Update The Story Soon Please. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/20 Good story please continue it |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/8 Can't wait for more |
| Finnish Paragade chapter 11 . 11/2/2019 This has been quite an intersting story, three days of reading this... |
| willam and jack and jake chapter 11 . 8/22/2019 very interesting |
| Dark Raven 19 chapter 11 . 8/21/2019 Finally finished reading this chapter. As nice as it is to read more of this story it was annoying trying to read this massive chapter since I kept losing my place so for future chapters if you make it massive again could you please split them up so that it is easier to read please. |
| MilandaAnza chapter 11 . 8/21/2019 I’m really enjoying this story and absolutely intrigued about Hermiones ‘special school of magic’. Since you seem to hbe using DnD magic systems I’m intrigued. I would think she’d be a Wizard / Loremaster, but the idea of her ending up as a Divination specialist (information gathering) and all the jokes from Violet about how she hates divination would be absolutely amazing. On the flip side; I wonder if she’s going to end up being a Divine magic user in her ‘support’ role. Albeit a Psionic would be an amusing take on the smart girl. Can’t wait to see; I’m surprised she can honestly! |
| elfbs chapter 11 . 8/21/2019 Uhh, it took me ages to read it all. AWESOME! Good plot, good characters, good story and a very very very satisfying length. Sooo, thank you. The only complain I may have is a serious lack of Hermione. Ok, the MC is Violet so it's only natural she gets most of screen time, but after that I would expect a 50-50 share between Kara and Hermione. As things are until now, her presence is so marginal that it's like she's not even part of their bond. Oh well, soon they'll be at school, the best place to make Hermione shine. I only have too wait and see Anyway, good job! |
| Jonn Wolfe chapter 11 . 8/20/2019 Welp, looks like WonWon's going to be a villain at this rate. Wondering if those rings are influencing him. Is Faust causing trouble here? |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 11 . 8/20/2019 Love the story |
