damnit. i hoped to read more chapter.

Ok it was good in places but it was complete BULL STINK you brought back both of Narutos parents. His father was in the death gods stomach and his mother was in the afterlife. Only a small very small piece of their chakra was left in the seal only to be used at the right time or to reset the seal. Without a body the chakra would disappear outside the seal. So get it right. Also why is Danzo still there with the proof of his root anbu it would be enough for his death by the lord of fire. Next time do some research on the female body. 12 inches is huge. 18 inches would NOT fit in a woman. Next a body would not swell like she was pregnant. It takes time/months for a woman's body to be able to handle it. Again do RESEARCH before writing.

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I hope this story continues this story can become something good please continue this

NOW WAIT A SECOND, if the uchiha clan were still alive then why was sasuke such a dick in class before naruto even did chapter 1? THAT MAKES NO SENSE! They should already be LONG GONE (when sasuke was 8 so naruto would have been 8, WAY before he became a demon!).. Your story doesn't make any sense!
Well it STARTED ok, but now it's just a harem "gotta catch them all" even if it throws logic to the wind stories, I'm out!

Not a flame but just some common sense.. Ninja careers are usually mid 20's and younger, with good ones being early 30s... Only a BARE handful survive past that.. If naruto is 19 and already hasn't done what he did in canon, THAT basically all the people he should meet.. VERY YOUNG (everyone else should be dead). Considering kakashi was mid-late 20's already in pre-shippuden and thirties by shippuden that's about the OLDEST person he should interact with, You gotta look realistically at people's AGES here.. Kakashi signed on at 5! So that tells you the people of this world "AGE" quite differently then IRL... For hinata to be hitomi's middle child and be 19 (same as naruto) then she's gotta be a COUPLE years older then Kushina and that just makes an even BIGGER problem.

Her MIDDLE child was hinata? Then year she's OLD.. And naruto getting with her is just YUCK!

Wait a second, Hitomi? Like the one that knew kushina and minato?.. And naruto is 19? Shouldn't she be in like her 50s or early 60s? THAT'S JUST NASTY! I never understood the COMPULSION of authors to have naruto get with the "adults" of the series.. Especially when with the WONKY time lines a LOT of them SHOULD just be "why would he WANT TO?" with a lot of them! Minato was late 20's Early 30's when he BECAME hokage... Add in a few years too add his face to the monument and to ACTUALLY BE hokage and and he's EASILY in his mid-to-late 30s add in 19 MORE years... (naruto's age since he died when naruto was born) means hitomi and haishi are looking at 50-60 years old! *shivers* AGAIN, NOBODY takes into account TIME MARCHES ON for these "other" characters. Tsunade not withstanding, all these "women" should look like HELL.. (did you NOTICE by boruto ANKO looks like a MACY'S DAY BALLOON, sakura looks more like a guy then naruto does, tenten looks like a mean old librarian with 20 cats and kurneai has filled out in ALL THE WRONG ways,.. My point is, While the GUYS of the series seem to age well, the GIRLS age HORRIFICALLY!). (probably because they look 16 at 12 and 21-22 at 16!).. Don't have naruto get with "mothers" and such just the younger ones (his age, or there about).. and the older ones? well maybe have tsunade teach them her trick or something. Because YUCK those are UGLY mental images. (remember tsunade is never even SEEN in the anime with her power down, just a "away shot" like you'd do for a HIDEOUS MONSTER). Probably because "warriors" don't grow old, their expected to DIE before then and in a ninja village, EVERYONE is a warrior.

The naruto series is HIDEOUS with "linear time" It's just an ABSOLUTE MESS! (even canon...WORSE then dbz, or really ANY anime, before OR after it...) Him at 19? Um.. WELL.. He's a JOUNIN by staying in the "dumb-ass" mode and has already CRUSHED A WAR and LED ARMIES AND is KNOWN as probably the most powerful person on the planet... (yet here, he apparently collected gear he "hoped to never use" and hasn't... and can't seem to even grasp WHY he has a bloodlust *or control it* even though he WILLINGLY chose it!)

I don't get this one, I mean in the canon, hiashi is "cold and distant" because Hinata reminds him of her mother, but NOT a total a-hole, but in this one, he HASN'T LOST her, so he's REALLY GOT NO REASON to be an ass-hat... Yet seems to be a WORSE one!

OCs? In Naruto? Do you know HOW MANY CHARACTERS there are in that series? What could you POSSIBLY need OCs for? It went on for 720 episodes, and NINE-TEN movies! How in ALL those characters can you NOT find who you need?

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.

I really want to see what happens next. Looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great work!

More intrigue and problems

Samui the alpha

Huh, think that’s the least bit of lemon you’ve done in a chapter so far
Well, I think it’s obvious Samui will be an alpha mate

Hmm, I wonder if any Daimyo family females will be taken