Just read through this story all over again and I still love it. I know it hasn't been updated in a while, but I'm real curious to see how you'd have the rest of the story go. Especially with Tia's connection to the dinosaurs. And I'm real curious to see how you'd write the more action/horror-filled scenes. :D

this is baaaad

people like this?

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this would not happen in jw thank gawd

I like how you really build up the setting and that we get to spend some time with the characters before the chaos. That was something the movie really lacked.

So Tia and Owen need to get together, like now! Not to mention their argument and subject changing about rent being absolutely hysterical. There's nothing U love more in fic than circling conversations and arguments lol.

But I like the little changes you have in here, especially in terms of making Zach and Gray into more 3d characters with Tia around. Great job! I hope you update this one soon.

You actually gave some sort of a personality to Zara, which is very refreshing as the movie did not, amd a very valid reason for Tia to meet up with Zach and Gray. I love Tia's interactions with Beth and I can't wait to see what happens next.

It's always really fun to read/see other people who are anxious for others to get together. It's just so much fun to see the lengths that they'd go to be proven right and a bet/betting pool is always the most fun way to see it pan out that way! Great job!

#sexual tension

#zane and gary

#love tia

#love tia and owen already

I love this opening. Its really refreshing to just jump right into Tia's life with Owen and being in Jurassic World. All the little bits you've given into hers and Owen's characters were teat and its good to know, already, what her relationship/feelings for him are rather than questioning it for the long run. Great start!

-Riley

This is so amazing keep going