As someone who has been where Dust is in this chapter, thank you so much for writing this. I eventually managed to find my way out by writing my parents a letter, and even that simple act was one of the hardest things I have ever done. I had been trying to ask for help for over six months, but my version of Dust’s chains kept hold of my tongue... I ended up sneaking downstairs at 2:00 in the morning the day after New Years and silently bawling my eyes out as I finally managed to put my version of the Cirelian Trials into words. I cannot even begin to describe how gratifying it is to see you write this scene... that sometimes our thoughts betray and torment us, even manage to convince us that we deserve to suffer, but that they are wrong, and in truth we deserve to be happy, and we can ask for support from our friends and families, we aren’t burdens to them.

Thank you so much.

What a beautiful story, thank you for finishing it

That moment when you find a story that is so good, that you stay up until 5am to finish it, and run your phone down to 1%. I couldn't stop reading this, I loved. _ You have quite the little gem hidden here on this site.

I have a suggestion for anyone willing to try it. You know in the game Dust can find characters from other games. One of them being Bastion. Look it up if you must. A Dust Bastion crossover would be pretty good. Another suggestion is a Middle Earth: Shadow of Mordor/Dust an Elysian Tail crossover. Talion and Celebrimbor interacting with Dust could be interesting, being that Dust is a combination of two souls while Talion is his own man while essentially being possessed by a elfish wraith. Anyone want to try these suggestions? This has been the Anonymous Guest, and I'll see you next time.

I wonder why it took me a long time to finish this. Oh wait... I'm very hyped even though I already read this before. But I still love it! X3

I remember this time! X'''''''''''''DDD
I'm dying of laughter and tears are forming in my eyes... X'D
Oah, the bet... hahaha! X''''33

AAHHH! Even though I already read this... I still love it!

The ending nearly made me cry but the phrase "before his face became best friends with the floor" absolutely made me laugh.

I love Fidget as well. She's quite an amazin' character. And super adorable :3

Very fios. Plz keep updating

Wow, you are an outstanding writer. This story is amazing thus far.

i give this fanfic a e if you ever read ant of the harry potter books you would now what it means

This is awesome and it gives dust a chance at a happier life. :)

I absolutely LOVE Your fanfic so far! Its incredibly well written and the idea is so unique and soooooooo CUTE! I love the idea of bending Ginger and Dust sibling relationship into a mother and son relationship. (and Omg Baby Dust is adorable.) and I can't wait till Sarahi has her kid.

Can't wait for the next chapter!
Write on!

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