This was so cute! Keep up the good work!

Awesomeness! :-D

Love it! This needs a prequel and a sequel!

Very cute very nice a

put that in a file and label it "how ICPMY died reading fanfic"

That was so cute

So adorable! Please continue.

Aww! This is so sweet and cute. I like how well paced this story is. You take your time instead of rushing straight into the kiss, which feels more realistic and in character. I think it's interesting that you don't have them start dating afterwards, which makes it a more original ending.

Their awkwardness is too cute. I think it's funny how they argue over how they think they are the worse kisser. Tom's teasing, but sweet comment about how Marco is a good kisser for a human is nice.

Good story.

Very cute! Will there be more?