Ha, good for Lily! But I hope she's a little more careful as she walks along the street from now on.

Oh, this is so happy and then so sad! Both Luna and Cedric deserved better.

Yes, people who try to be friends with Dumbledore often end up regretting it.

Can't believe it took me so long to read this... It's so sweet any the characters are written with such truth and honesty to them that it made me smile how they interacted :')

Kudos to you for writing this in so little time! I wouldn't even be able to get a sentence down with all the pressure and you just wrote the sweetest story :')

-Lun

Great chapter

This is all very well written! I’m definitely following and am really excited for what else you will write. Everything is short and sweet and the grammar is so good and you’ve really captured the characters so well. I love how many different scenarios and characters you have, it really shows your talent. Can’t wait more, very well done!

loved all eleven chapters thanks ever so much.

Absolutely fantastic! I just found this and read them all, can’t wait for more!

Ohhh, Truth or Dare was great, and that Luna/Cedric one was so crushing Q_Q

This was so beautiful and sweet! I really liked the rapport between Luna and Cedric. Like the ship name suggests, I really think they are strangely perfect. It was great how you wove the soulmate!AU and the whole being of their relationship into canon; very cleverly done.

It was beautifully written. Well done!

I like this story because I like that Snape saw James instead of Lily and they /finally/ made peace with each other. I like the conversation between them and that he wasn't actually dead, instead he was in a limbo before he was brought back to life.

I like that you didn't change him too much when he woke. "it had to be his fault that he had been ripped" I love that you said 'fault' and not any other word.

Great story!

Children have no filters. I like that you have Teddy reading the word and asking all of these questions and he's at an age where he can't be distracted so Hermione had to answer. This was well written and you managed Teddy's curiosity here. It was well written and a nice family moment (I consider them family) :)

Omg, talk about the kind of conversations you wish you'd never have to have with your kids :p I loved how you had Hermione handle it though, it was very nicely written and kudos on writing that much dialogue, I always suck at it :p The 'you should never be glad someone's dead' line was especially good :) And you did an amazing job at writing a child too :)
Nice work ;)
Cheers!

Holy shit, wow, I didn't know I needed this in my life, this was such an original idea! (also you won't be able to convince me that seeing James again after death isn't Snape's idea of hell :p I loved that they sort of made peace with each other in this though)
(just one thing: I'm pretty sure Snape would never call James 'James' :p He'd use 'Potter' ;)
I loved the scene with Poppy at the end :')
Nice work!
Cheers :)

Okay, I love Teddy here. "Bootiful brain e'sploded all over your face" is quite possible the best line ever written in fanfiction. But this is adorable, and I really like how well Hermione managed to answer his questions without scaring him.