It was an amazing fanfic...loved it...I was experiencing a hoard of emotions. The starting was just like my dream fanfic...but I think that the ending was a bit rushed...I am not complaining...it was a really good fanfic.

Thank you

This was a great read! I liked the small differences between the original Twilight and this. I especially loved the Masen/Edward drama.

Amazing work! You are such a brilliant writer with a very bright future!
Though, might I suggest an alternate ending to this story where Rosalie does kill Bella and Edward is forever wrecked with guilt? Considering the plot and the varied lies and deceit that Edward had engaged in, it seems odd that Bella would forgive him, even go so far as to love him.
This is just a suggestion, with due respect to the writer.

Wow! What a wonderful story! I can't stop reading it, and went to work with so little sleep. He he.

Thank you very much for sharing this unique story to us. You are such an amazing amazing writer. Hoping to read more of your works.

Love your story!
thank you so much for writting it
kisses

Wow... this I enjoyed this very much! :D

What a great read! Thank you for all you put into it!

Amazingly written and it actually made feel connected to a story after a very long time. Loved it.

Wow, just wow! I did not expect it to be a little dark but it was worth it. I'm speechless. I loved it. I had lost interest in Edward Bella FICA but this fic brought me back.

:)

Um were there no consequences for Tanya and her sister. I mean drugging Bella and than again when she's a vampire. No killing, no were no longer family, no fighting, no nothing. They are just forgiven wtf

this was an unusual story in many respects. i liked the characterisation but i felt the ending rather rushed. thanks for sharing your work.

Loved this Story. Thank you!

Thank you for sharing your writing talent.