I can't tell you how happy I am that you updated. I love this story, I love all your CaptainSwan stories. Have you got any more planned? Thank you very much.

️️️️️️ i love this story so much! Im alqays checking my email hoping for updates

Screw Killian's hammering heart, my heart stopped for a minute there at the end. Another beautiful chapter my friend, you drew me back in so easily. Thank you once again for transporting me back to Edinburgh and back to these two nuggets. Also, props on the great use of Irn Bru and the word wended.

This is Sarah (lifeinahole) and I’m far too lazy to log in on my phone but I needed to sit here carefully emitting this high-pitcher noise because I love this story so effing much. Thank you so much for another brilliant chapter, no matter how sad I was for Emma through the front part of it.

Poor Emma, I’m glad Killian took care of her and explained his no and made sure she knew he did want to kiss her, just not right then. Excellent chapter!

I squealed at this so much that it startled my cat. Great chapter!

I have waited months for an update of this, my favorite fic ever. You are a gifted writer and I live these characters. I cannot wait to see what happens next. PLEASE do not keep us waiting!

Sigh! *heart eyes*

YES YES YES!

I was hoping you get back to this fic! I loved watching their journey and this chapter only made it better. Them admitting they are best friends, the descriptions of the shows (I'm so curious about these), August's reaction and welcome, and of course the ending. :) The adding of Lackey breaking in bathrooms (as a parent myself) made me giggle.

This is so real feeling even being written about fictional characters and you feel the beats of the story even more.

And yes, the world has gone topsy turvy, but it's nice to escape into the stories and hope one day I'll see this Scotland you describe. :)

Also here for these two's journey to find each other.

I love this story! You're my favourtie writer for Captain Swan stories! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I can’t believe it took me almost a month to read this chapter! IT’S SOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOODDDDDDD!

Everything from the meeting of August and Belle to the transatlantic phone calls to the bing8ng of candy and Bake off!

Just brilliant!

Graham! I am as surprised as Emma! I feel badly for her, she is hurting, but August is there and he gets it and he knows her and he’s comfortable for her. It’s probably better that she was with August than Killian, when she and Killian are finding their way back to each other and maybe having feelings that neither is ready to think about. I was surprised she hadn’t seen him in five weeks. He must have really missed her, while she was telling herself she didn’t miss him. Oh Emma, talk to Killian.

This is very good. Thank you for continuing, we appreciate your updates and all your writing. The Killian and Emma in this story are fantastic, they’re interesting, unique, delightful. The way Killian thinks and the way he expresses himself is so engaging. I hope he is beginning to heal from Milah and can see some good in himself as he tries to be a better friend and brother.

Thank you again. Looking forward to August Part Two, and the rest of the story.

Yay, another installment of my favorite story! There’s always so much to love about your writing. I loved the whirlwind of August the man during the August whirlwind of the festival. I didn’t except Graham to be such a sleaze, but at least he’s no longer in the picture for Emma. I wonder how this fresh betrayal will affect her.
As ever, you’re just brilliant and I can’t wait for more.

I’ve missed this story SO much! Love all of Emma and Killian’s interactions. Dying to know what Killian wrote and why they haven’t spoken in an entire month! Your writing is very engaging, thank you for continuing!

Awesome chapter. Can"t wait to read more. Thanks for the update!