Hey girl, I'm back!

During these hot summer days I wish it was raining for 3 weeks here too! (Whoever says London is very rainy is a big fat liar). I'm happy to read that my gal got her health back, and I feel for Jimmy, she was about to (maybe) accept to spend the afteroon with him and the rest of the gang. Poor thing...
I must say I love all the conversations between Ruby and Seventeen, she is always very patient. And not because he's a cyborg that could snap her neck with a finger :D
What you described with the wolves makes me mad...and reminds me of the Stark children finding the werewolf puppies!
t my boi learnt that he can relate to people! That's a big step forward...and I think he's lucky to learn empathy with Ruby, someone very perceptive and mature. He thinks he's superior to her for obvious reasons, but it's her who has a whole lot to teach him. And in the end he tries to teach ehr something too, because the display of death and decay was to be a lesson, to toughen her up. I know very little about Ruby's past, but I know that sensitivity is not weakness and she always seems tough to me.
Sev thinks he likes fire, and I think their attraction is catching fire :)
It's always a pleasure to read you!
Love
SSS

Hello dear!
I think I know I fucking love a ff when I'm willing to tackle a new language to be able to continue to read it (fortunately Spanish is less obscure for me when written than when spoken; but you already new this). Well, language barrier aside, I loved this chapter too. When she dreams of robots it's uncanny. I'm sorry to read that my Ruby is sick :( but it's a good plot device, that it is.
She wakes up in her underwear! It means that Sev took her pants off and saw the kitty panty 3 When she beholds his muscles through the wet shirt, ah mon Dieu... I love the low-key sexuality here. I really love it. It's a fire starting slowly...
About Ruby's personality, I forgot to mention it for ch.7, but I'm stuck at how mature she is: I think this is the only way she and Sev can work, even when she's mad at him she doesn't fight fire with fire, she always tries to understand and to make things go well for everyone. If she had a bellicose personality she and Sev would be done immediately...and she does all this head up high, always with dignity. So, I'm impressed with the kind of person she is. She's a grown woman. I think that Sev will become more mature thanks to her too. That's how she learns to go with his jokes, instead of being vexed. It's touching when she wants to peek in his wardrobe, just as she could understand more of him by his clothes. The clothes he keeps away from the others are the ones Gero gave him, aren't they?
We are starting here to know more about Ruby's background, and I'm more and more convinced she's fleeing an abuser :( he should go in there, he may not come out :D
The last things they say made me laugh so much!
She is afraid he might have pulled the panty down too...and he's telling her that she's homely, basically. But obviously he doesn't mean it, he just wants to tease her. The real question is, does he see her as beautiful? Because she certainly sees him this way.
Loved this chapter too!
Love,
SSS

Hello!
I know I had mentioned a "big ass review" but I think that reviewing one by one the chapters that touched me the most could be a better choice (I'm going to do it here instead of on Wattpad, it seems to me that here's where you do longer reviews.)
How couldn't I review this chapter?
I love the subtle humor in the conversations and how you can make every character realistic (and the world they move into as well). You manage all your characters perfectly, they are tangible.
Their dialogues feel natural, it's like real people. It seems like you do it effortlessly and I know, it's damn hard.
As I mentioned Ruby touches me in so many ways, starting with her bug-phobia (that's where I thought for the first time "yeah, she's my girl") but this is the chapter that made me love her even more: maybe because I can almost live again that moment of my life (I was one month late but, oh well, after all not everyone is regular, isn't it Ruby?) and I feel literally moved. At the same time one can feel the tension, knowing that the revelation of this pregnancy won't probably be romantic or fluff. And in the meantime, what to expect? It's a cliff-hanger...
If I didn't know if it could be possible to get this excited and moved when reading a work of fiction that presents a consistent language, now I know that I can.
Reading Spanish is tough for me and I can't allocate to reading all the time that I'd like, but you got me hooked :) I envisage this story to accompany me through the next months, and me loving every chapter, every word.
If there was a "thank you" button to express my gratitude for creating such an exquisite work, I'd hit it like Ruby hit "b"!
Looking forward to read more!
XoXo

Apenas termine su fic y... Me encanto! La manera en que plasmo el pensar y actuar de diecisiete fue increible... Me emocione mucho y me volvi a enamorar de este personaje, desee la DBZ este Androide me provoco algo de intriga pues su manera de ser era muy de niño, pero cuando no aparecio en la saga de boo me decepcione un poco y me alegre cuando ayudo con a Goku con la genkidama. Ahora veo el torne de la fuerza por el y con su fic me hace querer mas a este personaje... Mis felicitaciones por crear algo tan bueno... Y tambien porque su manera de escribir es genial, muy bien centrada y acomodo cada pieza de una manera muy acertada... Su fic ahora pertenece a uno de mis favoritos y lo volveria a leer de nuevo.

Jajaja! Este hombre no necesita armas! Pero es lo que le hace tan diferente y espectacular :3

Bueno! Aquí estoy! Leyendo de nuevo esta maravilla :)

Estos últimos dos días estuve leyendo tu fic como loca, no podía parar de leer! Escribes con una soltura envidiable, tu pluma es magnífica. Buscaba algo que leer para distraerme y encontré esta joya, sin palabras.
Desarrollaste el personaje tan bien, de alguna manera lo hiciste tuyo. Todos los personajes tenían personalidades bien marcadas y desarrolladas, eso es tan difícil de logran pero lo hiciste tan bien. La historia nunca se estancó siempre había algo que me mantenía expectante. Lloré, reí pero al final me sentí muy feliz de haberlo terminado y vacío ¿ahora con qué me entretengo?
Definitivamente leeré más de tus obras y si son de 17 más que encantada, me declaro fan de este androide, de tú androide 17.
Gracias

Estuvo HERMOSO, 17 es el hombre de mis sueños y pocos, por no decir nadie, ha podido plasmarlo como es realmente, aunque si es un poquito más blando ya y menos cínico, pero qué le hayas dado una esposa, hijos... Auri y Blake fueron de mis personajes favoritos, Honestamente yo quería ver más de Auri niña y sus ojitos de cachorro para convencer a su padre pero todos crecemos tarde o temprano, todo el Fic está perfectamente bien escrito, detallado hasta en lo más mínimo para darle sentido a su peculiar personalidad, y además una mujer que ya sepa quererlo y soportarlo tal y como es, ES SIMPLEMENTE PERFECTO

Gracias por escribir una historia que me hizo llorar, reír y decirle idiota más de una vez a 17 por su forma de ser, y espero pronto leer más contenido en otros fanfic

lo que me preguntó es, por qué solo Ruby está loca por el? Debería tener su ejército de admiradoras tras el, aunque el las mandé a volar... bueno eso no importa

gracias por escribir algo tan hermoso

Le diré al lobo que te muerda el culo... jajajajajajajaja

Pronto escuchare a #17, en audio latino
no sabes lo emocionada que estoy, siempre me recuerda a tu fic, tengo grandes recuerdos, y como esperaba que actualizaras . . .

Bueno ya termine de leer AORA sinequipaje

Hello ! Primero q nada creo que debo decirte que AME TU FIC me encanto todo, supiste crear una maravillosa historia de alguien tan complejo temido y al mismo tiempo amado A17 francamente me sorprendiste ,sobre todo por que es mi primer fic que leo Sobre él en si, y déjame decirte que me dejaste con ganas de más (: me encanta saber que hay escritoras tan Buenas como tú desde ya te digo que tienes una nueva fan. Espero que ojala continúes haciendo más historias Cómo está .me encanto todo d ella desde los personajes Hasta como lograste encajar tus piezas con aquellas que están sueltas en dragón ball super sobre como nuestro amado A17 logro ser Ranger y tener una esposa e hijo y adoptar 2 niños .

Estoy leyendo nueva mente este fic y la verdad me encanta

Pero derepente me pregunté como supo el ex novio sicopata de rubi dónde estaba exactamente porque asta savia q decir cuando se encontró con 17 e incluso tenía un mapa q como el dijo se lo dio un amigo
Así q mi conclusión fue q nico fue quien le dio la información nesesaria . Y si estoy en lo cierto ps perdón pero apenas me di cuenta

Ese 17, jajaja

Pobre 17, tambien 18