excellent chapter

He is nothing like a murderer, a murderer is cold, detached and don't understand emotions the same as regular people. he just sounds like a psychopath from what I've read so far.

Right... what does the body count have to do with ensuring a successful mission? That's terrible reasoning.

The point is to complete the mission with the least amount of deaths.

Good chapter. I like how you proclaimed him a villain and he backed it up. I've seen to many fics where the author tries to make their mc evil and edgy when all the mc is is a tsundere with a chip on their shoulder

The grin maniacly sentence made me cringe a bit but I get what your going for. If you're trying to make him look "evil" maybe try not making him sound like he drinks the blood of new borns, the best villain are the ones you can relate too. In my opinion anyway.

Haha good chapter.

Also I like how Azula's flirtations are one of the few things that unnerve Ketsueki. It makes sense that this is one of the few things that can get to him, even a cold hearted murderer can still be unnerved when somebody flirts with them (especially considering Azula isn't exactly the best at it either.)

That said I am very curious for the next chapter. Ketsueki could gain some really usefull knowledge from that library and considering the size of the library he could remain hidden from the avatar and his group. I wonder what he's after though, the possibilities are too big to even properly speculate about.

Thank you for the chapter.

Good chapter but why are you sudden making him such a wimp when it comes to women, he's not scared of Ozai but suddenly he's being cautious about Azula? A spoiled brat who's only use is as a firebender and for her looks? It's always extremely annoying when the MC starts acting like a shonen protagonist...

Just curious, but at the last paragraph did u mean to leave OC NAME In there?

Ketsueki actually seems pretty incompetent considering he can't seem to kill anyone even with his considerable power. It's actually quite annoying to read all the times he fails. Will he ever actually kill anyone, or just be terrible at his job all the time?

Pls! Don't kill our boyo Iron! He is awesome and one of the best characters in the series! Pllllsssss! (And TY 4 da chapter)

I am starting to see where u r going (leading towards a fire nation win aang death unless plot twists appear) and its ... Interesting. Not a big fan of actual evil winning as reading from their perspective tends to just leave u irritated and/or disgusted, still have a strong hope that MC will at least be a anti-hero as aang and the gang r awesome characters and people (even if they are extremely naive). And Iroh is awesome! TY for the chapter!

Ngl, I'm getting pretty worried MC will turn out to be a total douche cuz if that's true then ima dip (more of a feeling right now tho so DW). TY for the chapter!

I'm kinda hoping MC won't be a complete villain as while a goody two-shoes can be quite boring, reading about a diçk drunk on power is also irritating. Anti-hero is the perfect combo, and I bet 10 cents that MC is some type of blood bender or such. TY for the chapter!

A great chapter but man I can't wait for Ketsueki to put Azula in her place, it's just so fun to unravel her spoiled persona.

It says OC NAME you forgot to change it to actual name or it is on purpose?