I CAN'T BELEIVE HE LIED TO HER. THAT'S YOUR DAUGHTER FOR STARCLAN'S SAKE. Can you just have May come in a dream to Frostmask and tell her the truth? Also, I want full-on revenge on SkyClan. There was no need for them to attack the camp. The mouse-hearts.

I wanted Frostmask to murder Paledusk :( great work, keep it up!

Guess I’ll have to wait then! And Paledusk is being rather confusing. I might have to go back and reread the prologue. So the truth is out, and Frostmask is, understandably, very upset. Can’t wait to see where this goes!

I feel the same as Frostmask, I don't know if Paledusk is lying or is actually being nice! I mean he gave her the herbs and stuff but I don't believe the things he said about Sedgestar. I loved this chapter please keep writing!

Ok wow. Just wow.

Sneaky sneaky bastard. We knew that but still. Bastard.

I wonder how long it will take Frostmask to question the fact that he acted like he didn’t know the herbs were from. He had to of known that they were stolen from Shadowclan, if not them the stolen from SOMEONE. He’s a deputy, he can’t just not ask where they came from. That’s a national security risk.

I mean I can’t say a lot. Just wow.
I see this going very down hill for awhile.

Ok wow that was some good shit!

But first “ he landed a blow on the cat's side so powerful that it knocked them to the ground.

Frostmask blinked. Poolcloud had such a gentle nature, most of the time she forgot his soft and fluffy pelt hid hardened muscles.” my big boi Strong AND Fluffy!

The battle scene was incredibly well written, old news I know, but it’s been a while so it hit the spot real good.

I had a whole thing typed out about Darkpelt but it disappeared somehow and I got pissed and left this tab open for days.

Just saw the next chapter was updated so I’m just gonna post this and go read that

Oof, Paledusk thinks he’s going to play the long con. Secrets don’t stay secrets, eventually Frostmask will find out that he lied about turning May away.

I would say I pity him when it happens, but she’s gonna absolutely flat him, and I will enjoy it.

SkyClan has survival at the root of its motives...what is RiverClan hoping to achieve? If they needed herbs, why didn't they ask? And why damage the others?
I hope Autumnleap and Frostmask pull through...they are so adorably cute together, even if they don't realize it themselves;)

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Poor Autumleap :(

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Love it you som amazing

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Love it so much you are really talented

hey is the scars mean you faced something and lived, a reference to tribbleofdoom?
If so good job, you earned my respect.