Ahh I like this

I like Shika too unfortunately not many fanfics tho /3

Ah! Raishi reminds me of Grell from Black Butler or Kuroshitsuji! I adore this! Please update soon!

Love it! Please update soon! I NEED more Shika and Raishi moments! They're so adorable!

Starting this chapter everything went downhil...everything doesn't make sense to me. Why would Zabuza join Uchiha Clan? Excuse me...did he already know Raishi had kill his disciple. If you watch the anime he actually loved Haku and he even cry when Haku dead but in this story act as nothing happen. Actually i like this story but after read this chapter i lost all my mood to continue read this story...

Hope you continue this

Very good

Oh man, I have never really been much of a fan for reading male oc centrics for some reason, but this. This is amazing! I absolutely love Raishi and his character as a whole!

I think you did wonderfully by having a, what normally would be cliche oc for being related to Sasuke and turning it onto its head. I like that even though Rai is related to Sasuke, he doesn't fall for the old believes or is obsessed with revenge like his cousin is. I also really like how you have brought about Rai taking on the position of Clan Head as well as the issues of trying to revive and keep the clan going as a power in the village. I think it's a really important aspect of being a clan and I love seeing the hardships that they will have to go through to not only better themselves but their clan and how it will effect the village.

As for the romance between Shikamaru and Raishi I think is really interesting. To me, it feel like Raishi being male isn't even a factor to Shika at all. Though I did think it was hilarious that Shika faked not being able to water walk when Rai had to walk across it. I was more curious on how they came to the conclusion that Shika was riding with Rai in the first place.

Anyway, so sorry about the really long review! I tend to ramble when I find a story I really like. XD I can't wait to see where the story goes with Zabuza now being an Uchiha and what will happen when the Chuunin Exams come around!

Can’t wait to read more!

:D

I'm obsessed! I love Shika and Raishi's reactions! and I love your decision to adopt Zabuza! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Please update ! In love with your story

This is a great story!
I love Raishi!
Hope to read more soon!
Good luck!

I'm pretty sure that the massacre happened a couple weeks after Shisui died...

i really enjoyed this chapter, i can’t wait to see what’s in store for next time!