This is a rlly good story! Well done!

Great story! I would love it if you included the twins’ sister as mentioned in chapter 17 in the book, I think that would be really interesting, but I love it so far!

Please update

Hello Miss Fairy, glad your alive and still kicking. Understandable real world stuff gets in the way of fanfiction greatness. I'm thrilled to hear despite struggles your 2020 is active.

ON TO MY REVIEW: Oh Ben yea irony is cruel. War no matter the out come poeple are hurt badly. You can't give up on your purplette. Really all this was tearing Audrey apart? Huh shocker to hear little-miss-self-involved actually cares. Chad isn't a genius, but the plan isn't THAT stupid.

HEY! Amy isn't as strong as her twin. But she's no pushover either. Seriously Audrey you want Amy to put your hair on fire again? Or better rip your tongue out, no? So shut up. Ben poor beastie already has enough headaches.

- brilliant sunset. The bright oranges, the purples, and, she would never admit this out loud to anyone, but the pinks as well soothed her as she exhaled. - Of course the pinks remind her of Amy. Gaston and his idiotic sons, don't understand Mal is completely right.

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

Love this story but I would like it to be continued. great story

Hey, do you have any plans on updating this story? It's really good and I think it would be interesting if/when Mal gets turned back good, the Gastons take her back again and they ...rape... her. For real this time... I know that sounds so depressing and disgusting but I think it would really make the bond between Mal and Amy grow stronger along with Mal's bond with the boys and Ben. And then you can have Lori and Mal become really good friends and relate and empathize with one another because of this tragedy. Anyway, it was just an idea...

Keep writing!

OMG! This is so good! Please keep writing!

Update take your time

Really your trying to keep Audrey's head on stright? Be honest Cad Harming no your not. I'm surprised Audrey's even THAT concerned, instead of just herself. Now Ben seeing the good in people isn't wrong we have a wicked & light side some just show them more than others. Chad your wicked side is hidden deep but it's not just wicked IT'S TRULY EVIL! As Jay once told you "That's really poor taste".

Lonnie breath thanks for the massage. Oh no Jay, Carlos & the others damn it. Of course Evie's a mess, 3 of her surrogate siblings just gone POOF! Doug is comforting Evie, but of course it's a 50/50 working. Those 2 LeDumb Twins seriously need to stop trying Mal like brainless baby machine. DON'T CALL HER "honey" YOU DISGUSTING EXCUSE OF A MALE!

Jay no Soldier your not allowed to give up. You had Mal until you lost her there, JAY DON'T YOU DARE STOP TRYING TO GET OUR PURPLETTE TO SEE REASON! Love is the strongest from of true magic. Way to go Amy, Freddie & FG. Right Ben or really any of Mal's crew needs to get close enough to her. Jay & Carlos while sadly trapped BOYS THINK OF A GAME PLAN NOW!

Cameron Boyce past away last night and today just seems like it's not real, losing one of the best disney stars. It broke my heart to hear he died. Oh and great chapter

Good to have you back

The sooner Mal is freed, the better.
Just hate the idea of Ben and Mal being against each other.

The spoiler for a certain part of Endgame that I purposely searched for didn't stop me from crying when it happened.

This story is really good! Please update soon