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Lucyole chapter 94 . 7/19 Nice chapter, a talk between Igor and Hermione was due I think. Hermione still loves Severus and wants to understand his relationship, but what Agenda have these people in the first paragraph and who are they? *chocolates for inspiration and the great work * |
Lucyole chapter 93 . 4/18 Interesting chapters they talk, Hermione is pregnant again from him but on Igors behalf wanting a child but Severus didn't tell her that information. Some new evil is coming and had been for years. Ron really has grown Hermione is sometimes still stuck in the past and needs to learn to let go, Severus really needs to be more forward with her he doesn't regret his time with her but in the end he should maybe told her a bit more about the why's and how's she maybe clever but in some other things she is pretty clueless but trys hard to overcome it bit by bit. Let's hope they can catch them and Severus, Hermione, Ron and maybe Igor can function as a family of some sort that would be nice. *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 91 . 3/20 Good chapter's. Even when I'm a bit miffed at Harry, Severus and most of all Hermione about their behaviors and idiotic ways of thinking and not understanding anything at all until it is to late but Severus really should have told her the truth about Charity and Igor from the beginning and not let her think about a future or try to be someone he isn't he made her only mad at him and herself for believing and wanting him. Now they are free of some sorts and can live a peaceful life. I hope Hermione comes to her senses and think more things trough ans about others feeling and motivés and that Severus will tell her a bit more or at least be more straightforward now. *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 88 . 2/7 Good chapter. Hermione is a bit disappointed at Severus for not having changed his ways at all and still pining For Lilly and then telling her the same about her being like that but it is different she knew he was alive and maybe was angry that he did not came back to her afterwards like he doesn't care about her feelings for him at all she gave him an Ultimatum and he came out of hiding at last to be a father he could have been with Harry al these years when he still needed him but he hides away and Hermione, Luna and Minerva were the only one that knew he was alive. Ron and Harry thinking she is mad for searching for him all this time but now he is there and back at hogwarts he can take on the mantle of Headmaster this time it being genuine. I'm excited what will happen next and what Hermiones reaction will be and whether they will come clean with each other or not. *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 87 . 1/20 Interesting and sweet chapter she found him at last she waited 19 years to be reunited with him and he has the gall to say he spyed on them all this time. Harry gets on my nerves a bit in some aspects and how he is treating others and his friends a bit harsher than nessesary really. Petunia has erotic or loving dreams of Severus at least that is what I deciphered here and wants to be free of her marriage and do what she loves interesting. Now we wonder what he will decide and if he will tell Harry the truth about himself (I think Harry has an inkling about it but won't tell it) and whether Hermione will leave Ron to be with Severus I really hoped for an happy end for these two maybe some karkaroff in the mix would be crazy and interesting and no one had done it I think. More please that would be great *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 86 . 1/6 Good chapter some years had gone by and Albus is more like his father and grandfather(Severus) than Harry maybe wants him to be. There are still death eaters around and Petunia got a visit from Harry with some odd talk I'm not entirely sure what it really meant to be honest or who Harry really meant at the end. I hope this story will come soon to an end and conclusion still want to know what you have in mind. *jellybeans for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 85 . 12/10/2019 A good chapter but somehow it make me a bit sad and I donvt know why itvs Luke I knew there wouldn't be a happy end for Hermione and Severus and she is really running after ghost all these years out of sheer desperation and hope to see him again and ask him why he left her really good. *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 84 . 11/23/2019 Great 3 chapter again thank goodness not as long as usual and not confusing eather just some more information from Hermiones point of view and her decisions she made she at least begins to listen to Luna and others too more please even when Ivm not so sure what your endgoal is or what the whole plot is or did that got lost somewhere as well? |
Lucyole chapter 81 . 9/27/2019 interesting 2 chapters and really Hermione jsut wont give up she is the stubbornest person ever but that we love about her. and now Hermione knows why Harry can't eat meat or dairy products really everyone thinks she knows everything that is a bit preposterus honestly how could she now when no one told her she assuming she knows about his deffiency with his liver (my mother often says believing is not knowing) really good chapters wonder what will happen next and if Hermione will give up or not more please *chocolate cake for inspiration and the good work* |
Lucyole chapter 79 . 8/25/2019 A nice chapter but I don't like how Hermione is acting right now she believes she is right in everything and when someone else is trieng to help or navigate her to another conclusion she outright dismisses them, Ron is more helpful and listens more to what Harry has to say and at least beliefs in him I like that. More please that would be great *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 78 . 8/11/2019 interesting 3 chapters but I would be more happy if you could write down how many time had gone by from the last chapter, Draco is an idiot really but Hannah has Neville he is much better for her, Luna is back and still the same mysterious girl like before, Hermione is as stubborn as ever and just wont give up on her being right, Harry has changed very much and Hermione don't know how to handle that now she is pregnant as well. there are still some things confusing me mostly the time gaps but I like the story and it is good please more soon. *cupcakes for inspiration and the good work* |
Lucyole chapter 75 . 6/12/2019 A nice chapter the arguing was a bit funny too Ron is clueless as always but that's OK. Crookshanks was Lilly's cat before Hermione interesting more please. *cookies for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 73 . 4/30/2019 Good 2 chapter, Hermione is stubborn and she annoys me a bit with her blaming Severus for the murders really why does she does that and why didn't he come out and explain of instead letting her think the worst of him. Poor Harry and Ginny losing their child that wasn't very nice of you doing that to them. Ron is still a clueless git really why do you put him and Hermione together again I never liked that pairing in Canon but oh well I take what I can get please let Hermione see reason soon that would be nice at least Ginny knows now to that he is alive will she tell Hermione on it? More please soon *cupcakes for inspiration and the great work* |
Lucyole chapter 71 . 4/17/2019 I'm speechless I don't know what to say about the story it is really one crazy confusing amazingly awesome story really everything in it is just so omph that your brain can't comprehend it at all and you have maybe to read it more than once to get it all into your head all these secrets, emotions really it blows my mind I wanted to give up halfway but no I kept reading it I wanted to know how it all ends and whether he Severus will live or not he apparently is but he still has somethings to do Hermione knows that and is hapoy with Ron but still isn't giving up hope on him even when she thinks some bad things she keeps believing it will end in a good way. But what is that prophecy trelaweany had told Draco really about and will it come true or not please write the end and give us conclusion to it all and at least some happiness for Severus as well. *chocolates for inspiration and the great work* |
Guest chapter 57 . 9/12/2018 It's such a great story, even when I'm sometimes a little confused. I love it! |