This was really well written nicely done :)

Wow. It's definitely worth exploring, since HIV/AID related complications are rarely part of any fic's plot line. I found the HIV turning into AIDS lines most...twisted and adds some kind of depth.

A touching story! Excellent work.

All I can say is great idea. Take it however you want.

It brought tears to my eyes *sniff*

yano, when yu read this listening to a really sad song, its almost depressing, in a compliment way, your a really gd writer:D

(i was listening to hurt by johnny cash btw ;D)

So very sad, but so very well done.

Ah ... Ah ... AH ... :(

That was a really sad story. :( I'm really glad you wrote this though. It's great that you took action and wrote this fic instead of waiting for someone else to do it. I'm glad it was you who wrote this. :)

The line that got me the most was:

"He wondered how long it would take before his own HIV turned into AIDS."

That line tore my heart into pieces. :(

Great work!

It's strange that there are so few HIV/AIDS stories out there. I read an absurd amount of HPDM and SBRL fics and not once have I read one where HIV/AIDS been mentioned. It's rather strange, when you think about it.

Well, needless to say, I thought this story was origanal and well written.

I just finished reading "Time out of Place" and loved it. The plot was origanal and engaging. Near the end, when Draco was sick, I thought that they were so sweet together. I actually am feeling a bit guilty for not reveiwing for it... I hate it when people don't reveiw. *hangs head in shame*

Anyways, I am now strategically going though all of your DMHP fics, because, hey, if you could write this well five years ago, you must be amazing now.

Until the next time I remember to reveiw,

~Victoria H.

Amazing story! HIV is a hugh problem! The story is so sad...

thanks now i am depresd but i still want to say it is good now to find somting happy to read

Oh, dear. That was so very sad... T_T

"Love of mine some day you will die

But I'll be close behind

I'll follow you into the dark

No blinding light or tunnels to gates of white

Just our hands clasped so tight

Waiting for the hint of a spark"- death cab for cutie, i will follow you into the dark

beautiful message, though sad. damn draco, he should've used protection...

great way of writing a summarized story. still had feeling.

i thought HIV could still be cured (not sure) if it was tended early...but it is your fic...and i loved your story...

and yes you're right on your Author's note...

m.. That really was something to think about. Not many writers take such things into consideration. Good Job ! :)