So I love this story. It’s so tragic and I love the desperation the Lucy has in trying to find Natsu. Then the torture Natsu has been going through in hell tops it all off. They are both so in love with each other that they create their own reality to be with each other. It makes me spoiler**
The sacrifice Loke makes and why kills me. But it’s so good and fits perfectly. Then the offer at the end. So satisfied.

Please continue writing other stories. This story was fantastic.

Finished? Heck yeah! Great job! Hope you continue writing new stories in the future :)

Cliff hanger. Why do stories always end with cliff hangers. Anyways. This was great.

Wow... Just wow...

Uh oh...

Wow... Just wow. This might turn out to be just like my other ones that I've liked. I'll read on.

Through both series, I laughed and I cried and loved! You're writing is so wonderful and enrapturing! You did a beautiful job!

Omg... I’m so happy this story actually got completed. I’m in tears because I really wanted an ending to happen. Too many wonderful fanfics don’t get one. This was a story full of a roller coaster of emotions. But can we give it up to LOKE! Like out of everyone. Loke being in Hell had so much more of an effect on him then any of the others physically and mentally. It was worth waiting for this story to be updated because that ending battle was “AMAZING” if I say so myself. Loved the story so much! I’m looking forward to reading more of your stories in the future. Your a good writing with an amazing imagination. Keep up the good work!

I'm glad you finished this story I loved it!

The build up at the end of chapter 16 where Loke was anticipating the big battle definitely drove the excitement for the fight up in me. The battle Lucy had with the Queen was intense, gross, and satisfying. Part of me can't help but imagine how different things may have turned out if Lucy had accepted the crown.

The ending was so bitter-sweet on so many levels. Not just because it's the end of the story and I've still yet to figure out Patreon, lol. But the sacrifice Lucy had to make in order to get what she wanted. I can only imagine how they're life will be like and I'm even more curious if what will happen to her soul once it ends. If Layla met her own end because of her actions in life, one can only imagine the repercussions Lucy will have.

I find myself at a loss to find the appropriate words to express my gratitude and appreciation I have of your work into this and the other stories you've written and I've had the pleasure of reading. Everything I think of just falls short and can't quite express the depth of my fondness of your imagination put into the written word.

Just know I love and appreciate your effort and the fantastic product that you share with us. Even the chapters I've missed reviewing or seemed to skip were usually because I completely forgot or simply couldn't come up with a review that felt adequate enough to respond to the glorious work you gave that chapter.

Even now I'm away a loss on how to wrap up this review properly. Because I have this bittersweet pang in my chest because I don't intend for this to be a goodbye on my part. My husband just offered to show me Patreon so hopefully I'll be following your work soon on that.

Thank you for another awesome story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

You are such a talented writer and I feel so privileged to have been a part of this journey from the very beginning. Thank you for your wonderfully clever storytelling, bold strokes of the metaphorical pen, and characters that are so real I can feel them. You were always too good for ff, and those of us who were lucky enough to stumble across your work will miss you dearly.

That was bittersweet xC
Thank you for your hard work in giving us new flavors of nalu through your stories!

it's been an incredible and heart wrenching journey. thank you

This is a gorgeous piece. Well written. And so damn full of emotions. Thank you for sharing it with us. And hope you find it in your heart to update Gold Hour too

Been a good ride Frey. Thanks a bunch

Congrats and yes I liked it all the way!