this was .. beautiful ... well done

Wow, just an awesome story involving the cutest, dorkiest couple around.

Really heartfelt and the interactions were very in character. Great job!

Cute tale. I love a 'take-your-time' romance story.

I think this was fantastically well written. The story is both incredibly realistic to the rwby universe as well as vivid in detail making all the scenes and interactions work beautifully in conjunction. I appreciate how the Rwby universe was not really altered, rather than changing the theme that a lot of other writers do, you took canon events and reactions we have seen a lot from the characters and used that to enhance your story telling. The whole story was really sweet and it just made me happy to read every second of the way. You just wrote the romance and emotion so well it was just so satisfying. I look forward to reading new stories by you. Keep up the good work, you've got a great talent for it.

great story keep up the good work. Lancaster is my favorite pairing.

that was goof.

This was Fantastic! from beginning to end! loved it!

quite a nice read and a perfect way to relax after a hard day, it captures the cute dorky side of Ruby and Jaune very well. some of the later parts seemed rushed pacing wise but the interaction between Ruby and Jaune was great and the way you keep the focus of the story on them is well done. hope to see more from you in the future.

Well I got to say it was definitively enjoyable my favorites were probably the first two they were just so cute but overall it was really great gave the right kind of warm fuzzy feelings that I was hoping for.

This was so nice and sweet

I love it. Lancaster is my favorite ship for Ruby and this was brilliant.

That was awesome and cute and... I honestly don't know how to describe it it was just... amazing (which is a HUGE understatement)

This was well-written. Cute at that. The interactions between the two main characters were pretty accurate, in my opinion. However, I can see a lot of spelling mistakes and such in this, so take care of 'em.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

i hope you make more lancaster one shots, i love lancaster. great story

I will admit that Lancaster isn't my OTP, White and Flame Knight both rank above it, but it has grown on me and I do see how it would work out in canon.

This is sweet little fic, shows how the two grew over time and how they fell In love.