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Daere chapter 12 . 7/21 I have just find your fanfic about FFXV and I love it! |
NicoleBL chapter 12 . 7/13/2017 Wow this was so amazing! U have no idea of how much I loved this, im so sad this was the last chapter! I need more, why didn't u continue? I don't think this is complete yet, we need to see this until Prompto is perfectly healthy! I love these boys, how they're doing their best for Prompto :") They're surely the best friends ever, especially Ignis, he's like the father of the group. Pretty well done, and thank u so so sooooo much for sharing this amazing piece of a story. |
Kitti420 chapter 12 . 3/22/2017 This was very well-written. I enjoyed pretty much every chapter of this, and the amount of detail you put into it. Poor Promoto though lol. There's quite a few of these types of fanfics out there, and I love to see what kind of scenarios the gang gets into. Great work! |
markofthemoros chapter 12 . 3/7/2017 I felt so moved reading this!3 As an overall review, it was captivating all the way, kept me hooked and never onced left a dull moment. I liked the realism in it, the description of seizures, visions, and oh, loved it when Prompto pulled a gun on Noct! You had quite a few typos, though. Like, to instead of too or hoped instead of hopped, mistakes like that. Shows that there's only do much you cando with a proofreading software. But anyway, great work! Made me wanna hurry it up and finish Collision already, lol. |
twaxer chapter 12 . 3/1/2017 Awwww this was super sweet! Ok, so I love your stories so far. Like this is right up my alley. Thanks so much for sharing, and can't wait to read more from you! |
twaxer chapter 11 . 3/1/2017 Aww he was just trying to help! Dude they better get that booger soon. That creature is driving me crazy. |
twaxer chapter 10 . 3/1/2017 ooooooh snappp there he go. It goteem. He gone. |
twaxer chapter 9 . 3/1/2017 Poor Noctis is getting hit hard :/ Dude okay for real tho. I'm going to bed. OHHH AND I SO WAS PICTURING A MALBORO IN MY HEAD THE ENTIRE TIME JUST BECAUSE U KNOW MARSHY AREA AND TEETH AND GROSS AND STUFF LOL So that worked out nicely XD I wouldn't have even known what they were called if I didn't do a couple of quests they were in recently lol i love coincidences |
twaxer chapter 8 . 2/28/2017 Okay that last chapter was supposed to be my last one, but then you go and drop that cliff hanger on me and here i am. This is all your fault. And I'm not terribly mad about it either. So..thanks I guess. |
twaxer chapter 7 . 2/28/2017 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO i just can't even how could you |
twaxer chapter 6 . 2/28/2017 Man they have it rough. At least the trip wasn't for nothing! Hehe but at what cooooossttttttt O |
twaxer chapter 5 . 2/28/2017 Aww man. They're all terrified, and I don't blame them. Ugh ur keeping me on the edge of my seat fo realz tho. Am I really sweating?! omg don't tell anyone plz i freak out so easily how embarrassing Thanks for the awesome writing! |
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twaxer chapter 3 . 2/28/2017 Okay somethin def wrong with mah main man. This is so good. I def should be asleep right now. But... You da bomb. This story be the bomb. How can I sleep with so many explosives threatening to detonate into awesomeness. |
twaxer chapter 2 . 2/28/2017 Uh oh his senses be going haywire... never an awesome neuro sign. But it MAKES FOR AN AWESOME STORY SO FAR! I feel like you keep everyone in character so well, too! For example, when Ignis prefers to keep his eyes on the dangerous path to keep his fam safe and bypassing the banter this time around. I love it. |