You did a good job capturing the emotions of everyone involved, especially Tony’s, but I was a bit confused about what was actually happening. In the beginning you said something like, the blast found it’s target, just not in the way Tony originally intended, but at the end Tony thinks that he meant to kill Steve. So was it intentional? I couldn’t tell. Also, who rescued Team Captain America from the raft?

Oh man. The feels! I absolutely loves this. You've got a lot of talent, the way in which you described and portrayed the different reactions and feelings... Oh, my. It was amazing. Thank you SO much for writing this! I have been waiting for a fic like this ever since I watched Civil War. While I was watching it, I kept thinking "But what if one of those blows/shots/etc turned out to be lethal?". So it was really wonderful to finally see here what could have happened! Excellent, outstanding job!

NO THis ISN't Ok

*cries for the rest of my life*

did you have to make me cry ?

OUCH, MY HEART

We need the infinity gauntlet

It so sad that I can't help like reading it. I sure if Tony went this far that mess him forever. I just can't see him getting over this. Everyone life is destroy by Steve bring killed by Tony's hand. Your heart goes out to everyone who love Steve rogers. I wonder if Tony tell press what he did. Peter will never wish have anything do with him after this. The only way I can see things getting fix is time travel. Tony got lot blood on his hands and needs to fine away to wash it off. It something if movie end the way your story did. Hope my review makes your day great.

You made me cry and cry and cry. Beautiful story... But so sad.

Man, this story made me cry so hard...