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that lad micheal chapter 3 . 12/21/2019 ow ow ow my heart ouch how dare you break my heart like this hgghh my heart was shredded when kakashi called out to minato oh god |
Tsukimine12 chapter 3 . 7/30/2019 Beautiful |
lany-chan chapter 2 . 2/18/2019 Guess what happened... again Sorry for the incomplete comment right below. My phone can be so annoying. l Just want to say thank you very much for this emotional story. |
lany-chan chapter 3 . 2/17/2019 I can feel the tears in my eyes right now. The interactions between Minato and Kakashi are so heartbreaking yet beautiful. There are funny moments and angsty ones and all of them are so real. It's |
Ashfire28 chapter 3 . 1/30/2018 This made me feel better. I was very unsatisfied dare I say a little angry that they didn't have Minato talk to Kakashi much at all besides stopping him from hurting Obito. I was expecting a little more of an interaction between them, but alas. Finally some closure AND acknowledgement from someone that Kakashi was a mentally unstable child at the time, and he's not to blame for the crap Naruto went through. If anyone is to blame it would be Sarutobi. He should be blamed doubly for not doing anything to change the villagers viewpoints after what they did to the mind of a powerful ninja on par with the Sannin (and then was somehow was surprised his child starting blindly following the rules as if he wouldn't learn his lesson quickly of what the village treats you like if you don't), let alone a young child. He should have not let Naruto get continually abused, but that wasn't Kakashi's responsibility to stop when he was ANBU. |
ChamaeleonEyes chapter 3 . 10/17/2017 That was beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this story! Gives the manga closure where it was badly needed :) I especially love the last image with the tears, that's absolutely beautiful! :D |
Verwijderd chapter 3 . 3/20/2017 An unexpected twist, but very fitting! I liked this little piece of teacher-student bonding. :-) |
Shadow.SSJ chapter 3 . 3/18/2017 A very good ending. Thank you for sharing. |
Samsara chapter 3 . 3/6/2017 Bad for my heart. At the beginning... I sincerely wanted to kill you when I discovered it was all a dream! I mean... WHY CAN'T I DREAM LIKE THAT!? And, ok, that was not really the problem, but... oh my god, so sad. Luckily, it turned out ok, I want to think Minato's soul really visited Kakashi in his dreams, just to please myself. I felt sad too when they were talking, all the pain that's there still. I'm confident though they will both continue their lives (and... not continue their lives in Minato's case xD) with a lot more happiness. Kakashi has everything he needs to be happy now. Thank you for the super beautiful story. |
PistiSpero chapter 3 . 3/3/2017 It's poignant. It's bittersweet. It's genuine. You really managed to capture Kakashi and Minato's relationship. Kakashi, the young, broken ,prodigy who always had Minato to guide him. As you said, Minato was the ray of hope, the guiding light for Kakashi. Both of them, as characters, are flawed. They are still struggling with sadness, they at still trying to accept the pain. But Their vulnerability, that is what makes them so beautiful to me. They feel like living, breathing, completely fleshed out people with a live of their own. |
cameron.sweet.5 chapter 3 . 3/3/2017 -.- annoyed that you pulled the cliched it was all a dream shit. You had a nice short story going and you have to pull that card. |
Prescripto13 chapter 3 . 3/3/2017 I smiled at how Tsunade shows her fondness for Kakashi! |
Samsara chapter 2 . 2/12/2017 I loved the whole chapter! Kind of sad that the whole plot to uncover Kakashi's face failed, Kakashi has some good trained friends, huh? This mand always has the upper hand when his face is involved! Loved it. I loved Minato's cheerful attitude (ok... I also love him) and how he moved around like it was his house and not Kakashi's. I'm dying to read what's coming next! I'll be sure to be here for the next chapter (I agree with the teacher part, sides of Minato not considered, sadly). GOOOOD JOB! |
Prescripto13 chapter 2 . 2/11/2017 I was happy when the anime showed us Kakashi's childhood home. It looked like it was outside of the village walls. Makes me wonder if perhaps it's still standing and in Kakashi's possession, as you propose! |
Shadow.SSJ chapter 2 . 2/11/2017 Iblike the way the characters interact with one another. Keep going! _ |