| Reviews for Harry Potter: The Slytherin Lord |
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Daisy chapter 5 . 8/28 Come on update already! |
Bwiisoldier chapter 5 . 6/15 I swear to god if this doesn’t get revived I’m gonna cry as this my favourite fanfiction to date |
Will chapter 5 . 4/26 Best Harry Potter story I have seen in years. Please tell me you are going to continue this story? |
Firefox chapter 1 . 4/23 Write more chapters |
Harban hendiwan chapter 5 . 4/14 Hola primero que nada te quiero agradecer por la genial historia que hiciste, con una temática interesante y un buen desarrollo de personajes. Para ser sincero solo entre a tu historia esta por qué es Harry y Daphne, pero bueno lo único que la jode son que solo tiene 5 capítulos. No hay muchas historias de HarryXDaphne buenas y si por algún milagro de la vida les esto te pido por favor que la continúes Muchas gracias por escribir |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/17 Sadly another good syory bits the dust of abandonment |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/5 please update omg this story is amazing your leaving me on a cliff hanger here dudeee |
Teamemmettandkellan chapter 5 . 1/28 Damn. I really really like this story. Sad it’s discontinued. Hope everything is all right. |
something-siriusly-wrong chapter 1 . 1/26 this is going to be excellent |
TrueNobleNoodles chapter 5 . 1/25 ...SUCH A GOOD STORY! Now, there are a few spelling mistakes here and there but this story is downright bloody brilliant in my opinion even if it does have the standard clichè of a Harry/Daphne pairing fanfiction It was just executed brilliantly! It's rather unfortunate though that this story hasn't been updated in 2 years. I do hope you have time again for this story Mr Author because I love the concept a lot! There aren't many HP/DG stories like these sadly so it always excites me to read a good story. Hope you continue this story someday, TrueNobleNoddle. |
Entropy the Eternal Destroyer chapter 5 . 12/5/2019 Ghast tears? really? Nice Minecraft reference. Also, good chapter. |
Jacob Phantom chapter 5 . 9/2/2019 Please update your story soon! |
N. A. Wennerholm chapter 1 . 8/27/2019 You need to make some corrections on gender terms in this chapter. For example, you reference female shop and office keepers and as you read further you use male gender terms when they approach Harry to first speak to him when referencing Harry you are correct but not then the pet shop woman you use his instead of than him meaning Harry. there are other errors threw out this chapter. Plus there are other gender screw-ups threw out you will won't to re-read and correct those errors for easy reading and to avoid confusion. |
Nigel943 chapter 1 . 8/8/2019 After reading less than half of the first chapter I'm done reading... Aside from the fact that super rich super intelligent etc etc Harry (it's hard to come up with ideas someone else hasn't used yet) it's rushed, you have him acting out of character rather than the way you intend, ntm where the fuck he got ingredients to brew nutrient potions if his visit to Diagon Alley was AFTER getting his letter to Hogwarts... |
thomaspheasant chapter 5 . 6/22/2019 please update |