looking forward to the next chapter

Good luck with school, you'll need it. Remember: real life comes first. At any rate, glad to see another chapter, and it looks like Noire is still going to be a complete tsun even when in captivity, no one can easily break the tsun. Anyway, once more good luck and have a great day.

Best start I've seen in a fanfic

This is getting very good... Also i'm kinda surprised Uni didn't pick up on it, then again a sniper can't move that fast without revealing herself... Also "his" facility... Geez that's not suggestive at all? xD But still, interesting to say the least...kinda excited for whatever comes next xD (and by kinda i mean REALLY)

It's an realy interesting story so far. Noire falling for the trap rather simple was a bit surprising, and I thought this would be a way longer thing where Noire takes multiple, becours she thought that they would increas her shares, but actualy weakens her slowly or something like that, but no it was almost instant :D I realy like the fast pase of the story, and I am interestet in seeing how Uni and Kei will reakt to Noires dissapearing and obviesly what happens to Noire from now on. Keep up the good work, but don't rush enything

That escalated quickly, and an important lesson can be learned here: never take pills from anyone you have just met. Nonetheless it's good to see another chapter and I am very concerned about what is going to happen to Noire, keep up the great work and have a good day.

A very bloody start to a story... I love it. Can't wait to see what will happen to him when he tries to kill Noire, he'll probably catch her cosplaying and be too confused to do anything. Looking forward to future updates on any story you got.