| Reviews for A Forbidden World |
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The Writing Crow chapter 1 . 1/13 Whoa, YOU'RE the one who wrote this? I just got done reading your KOF Fresh Ideas stories, and I remembered reading this one a long time ago. I didn't know it was you who wrote it, that's insane how small the world can be. The fact that you also know RobertCop is cool, he writes great KOF fanfiction too. I don't think there's enough Dead or Alive stories out there. I hope you consider working on different characters and making more DOA work, just a side note lol |
Dawn of Chaos chapter 1 . 2/2/2017 This was just amazing! And if I could bold, italicize and caps lock the word amazing for you I most certainly would. I was completely entranced the entire time. The pacing was beautiful and while it may have been a little obvious what was happening, I still couldn't wait to see how it played out afterward. And you certainly didn't disappoint. So sweet, creative and definitely fullfilling for any reader. :D Great job! |
The Man They Call The Truth chapter 1 . 2/1/2017 Truth is wrestling, tity, AND hot lezzy action? This story had it all. |
YuriChan220 chapter 1 . 1/30/2017 This was totally awesome! Mila, Lisa and Tina~! Woooow~! Just sexy and beautiful at the same time! Long, but awesome! This is one of the best stories I read! Great job! |
Major Mike Powell III chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 Well, well, my friend... HOO-RRAH! 1st Review EVAR, Btches! This was absolutely awesome. :'3 This was just...this was absolutely, fucking glorious! *O* The hype at the start was nearly palpable, the sheer way in which you depicted Mila's love for pro wrestling, and most importantly, her wonderful hype love for Tina and Lisa...haaaah~ Just, sooo cute and so heartwarming~! *A* It sure provides an exquisite contrast to the sheer lesbian debauchery that happens in the second half of this story~! *O* Like...I'm...I'm just, speechless. That beautiful, gorgeous, glorious~ lesbian threesome in the shower for these three gorgeous, drop-dead sexy vixens...just...wow. :'3 This was fucking awesome, and the ending was sooo cute and it tied the story together with a big, red bow. Absolutely amazing. This *is* your finest piece yet, my friend! *O* Outstanding! Semper-Fi! Carry on! |