I love you story wirte more please aladdin and kougyoku 4ever

Thank you for being such a nice writer! I love your story! Honestly, you have the best grammar out of all the people writing fan fictions. I read that this is going to be deleted, but is it really going to be? I hope not. Write more!

I really thank you for having few errors in this story. But honestly, it was a little m rated for me in the middle. That aside, it was a great story. I don’t really care about the shippings as long as the story’s plot is good.

it's up to you if you wanted to do it as another one shot or have a few chapters but if anything I want to see aladin meeting the whole kou family judar it would be funny just to think about it
or even if aladin's parents are alive to have both family meet or something
or for kougyoku to meet aladin's friends and lastly because i'm not a big fan of sinbad (just in your story beause he nearly raped kougyoku maybe even in the anime too if i think about it ) i wouldn't mind seeing him be arrested or something because he does deserve it a bit
btw i love reading and rereading "it's so cliche" even though i'm not a fan of the cliche type of fanfics but somehow you have a good way with words
XD

Great story but Aladdin seemed kinda ooc. Not too much though.

Im very happy with this fanfiction you know why dont you get publishied in wattpad also?

My gosh best one shot i hace wow...

well.. I would like to read another sequel..
they're so cute..
please make another sequel please.. please..
I really enjoyed it..
thanks to you..
:D

OMG! This is so damn beautiful! TTuTT I'm so happy because there not so many oneshots of this ship. I really had fun, especailly with the moments Aladdin shown his huge ego. Hahahahha I love it XD I hate Simbad! (I always hate him) but... How dare he!? Thanks to god Aladdin rescued her. Sincerally it's one of the best fic I have read of Alakou. I hope I'll read more Alakou fics from you.

I loved it! It was so cute/ and steamy KEEP IT UP