A bit too much shipping going on for my personal opinion about their relationship but greatly written, just like Not Over Yet. Especially with the added challenge of writing as Chloe :)

It's not the usual fic I read but like damn, it feels good to read this.

And there were sentences that were so great "I'll love the hell out of her" for exemple, damn I could cry reading these. Thanks for writing this story and I enjoyed a lot the Chloe's journal form!

Great story!

Ugh finally a decent story. I found others but some were not finished, too rushed or just worded weird. This one's pretty damn great gotta say. Made me feel wayyy better since I only finished the game two days ago.

ohhh its finished? damn

Very nice. I find these stories always leave you wanting more.

Having read all of it: Great job, i think you hit Chloes rambling style very well. Casual continued usage of Maxs power seems unwise, though, if she believes it caused the tornado. And the casino thing was plain dumb risky, if someone checks footage later they are extremely obvious.

Another note occured to me: Rachels parents are very much alive and would likely both hover and object to Frank

Note: The lighthouse does collapse from the storm and there's trees falling over, so that place is not safe at all. Great writing!