Reviews for Objectivity
Genius Girl chapter 78 . 8/8
"Karin biting herself for power works because she in canon has a blood line where she can give others and even herself power through biting"

That doesn't make sense. That's like saying that you can create a perpetual motion machine by connecting the output of an electric generator to the input of an electric motor and the output of said motor to the input of the previously mentioned electric generator. And for some reason the generator even generates additional power.
InoSaku chapter 78 . 8/7
Wait... Shisui is alive?
Camel chapter 77 . 8/5
I like Kiyoshi (I think means perfection) And Kosuke, or rising sun.
Thomas Drovin chapter 78 . 8/7
Welcome back! My word you update quick and it didn't take long for you to pick out a couple of names for Sakura's siblings either!

Sad to see that Harui MAY be having to go home soon after all the changes she's been able to do, however there is STILL the question of a certain Snake Ninja, Sasuke, Danzo and Obito to deal with...I look forward to how they do this!

Meanwhile Hinata and her sister are planning an act of rebellion against their clans 'sealing ways' with Tenten and Neji's help. I wonder what the fallout from THAT will be? See you next update whenever you can manage it! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!
SkullRaid chapter 1 . 8/7
Oohhh update!
InoSaku chapter 77 . 8/4
Twins?
Genius Girl chapter 77 . 8/4
"Karin adopted a fierce expression, and bit her own arm, and Haruhi could see the energy surge through her"

How does that work?
Alexia Rivera R chapter 77 . 8/4
Hola.
Pongo este comentario para aportar en los nombres de nuestros hermosos bebés y e aqui mis nombres: Yuriko y Yukio. Me gustaron los significados aunque no fue fácil elegir por qué entre más buscaba más nombres me gustaron. Ja ja ja. Escogí Yukio por lo que le deseo a ese niño sorpresa una buena fortuna y Yuriko por seguir un poco con lo de las flores como con Sakura pero ahora su hermana es un lirio. Espero que se entienda y también espero ver una actualización pronto no hay presión solo has tu mejor esfuerzo que todo lo que publicas me a encantado te deseo mucha suerte en este fanfic y en todo lo que te propongas.
Hasta luego Alexia
Guest chapter 1 . 8/3
Kiyomi for girl and hibiki for boy
Someone chapter 55 . 8/3
I absolutely adore this fanfiction but i hate what drastically measures you took to Jiraya. This was just... i cant. Im sorry, but how you made almosy every other character better, improving, but then just wack it with him? Yes he is a pervert and peeks but grope? But do that to Sasuke? No.

. I would love to see how this would end and play out but that just... You are a brilliant author and your writing skills and amazing but to completely change a character like this? Yes it could have gine that drastic but would never. To do this just for plot? I... i cant. Trust me this is one of the very BEST oc/si Naruto stories that I have come across but this twist just killed me. I fully supported every other change and added details but I can't support this. I was very emotionally invested ans readu for the worst but this was turn I wasn't expecting or ever could handle. Love you though c:
Someone chapter 9 . 8/2
I love the story and all but why does she keep acting like she forgot the story? She should kniw how they introduce themselves, why Kakashi told them not to eat, etc but she acts like it's all new. Kinda irritating
FlameEternal chapter 1 . 8/4
OMG LOVE THIS STORY!

Anyway, idk why but your challenge at the end to find names for Sakura’s new siblings really made me want to do it. So of course i went and found names:

Girl: I like the theme of using flower names for Sakura’s sister and I think the name KIKYO. It is the name for the Bellflower and the flower itself stands for unchanging love and honesty.

Boy: for the boy I found HANZO. The character for HAN can mean “half” and ZO can mean to “hide”. I thought this could be a clever name for him cause he was the hidden twin

Just a thought. Again LOVE the story (one of my favorites on the site). Can’t wait for the update!
tigergirl1723 chapter 77 . 8/3
I actually like the name Ichigo for either because he/she could be the "one protector" and if they have an inner voice it would be similar to the zanpactou spirit idea. I also like the name Chise for the girl and maybe Seto or Kaname for the boy. As you can tell, I don't know a lot of Japanese names besides the ones from anime. :P
nadia4245 chapter 77 . 8/3
I really like the names Yumi and Kaito
Thomas Drovin chapter 77 . 8/3
Hey there welcome back! I see Karin, Sakura, Kakashi, Yamato and Haruhi got back to leave in time for the arrival of Sakura's new brother and sister! YAY!
The question is now...WHAT to call them? I have this in mind and you can decide:

Girl: Mio (A beautiful cherry blossom, or a beautiful thread)
Boy: Itsuki (Timber Tree)

I picked THESE names as Sakura's name MEANS "Cherry Blossom" and what better to have a pair of siblings named after the flowers and trees where you GET Cherry Blossoms? *Chuckles*

Hope they help...it all depends on what the other readers say...you may have to have a poll with the names you like and what they like.

Anyway thanks for the update see you next chapter whenever you can manage it! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!
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