More please.

If spawn from images comics becomes part of this fanfic, or at the very least either ainz and/or his children gain his necroplasmic powers and such, i will scream for joy!

Please update soon.

One more thing, can also see beelzebub with electric powers and spped of the x-men mutant surge from marvel comics and maybe wield a universal weapon(the hammer like weapon wielded by the kree warrior, ronan the accuser from marvel comics). Also can see how ainz ooal gown the denizens of nazarick are like the eternals from marvel comics, only instead of cosmic energy, they manipulate magical energy(look them up wikipedia, comicvine, and marvel wiki to see what i mean). Once again hope the next chapter comes soon.

Abandonando?

Please let the next chapter come out soon.

where new chapter?

oblivon2991, i can only say one thing. Your writing is at Supreme Being level. Even more!
It took me a lot of time to to keep up with your story. I spend a lot of time. Many days, reading it.
And it was worth it. Every second.

But, as it is a review and not foreplay, i will take my time to make review.
Possitives:
1.I don't like making lists so lets end it before it will lay eggs.

Reading it make me go with many emotions. Often laughting, getting me a feeling of action or stress from a story. You did a great job with it.
You created many characters that inspired me to go deeper into my mental procces of creating a good character and change few ways of thinking.
Refrences are also at good level. Of course this is a cross-over, not simple fanfic.
Your story is a top level crossover. Mixing Overlord and Gate and changing world out of this a great job at worldbuiling.
*You really gonna say those sweet world to Author-Chan, don't you SzrEdeR?*
*Shut up brat, let me continue*

As i was writing, i am pleased by your writing.
But i must say few negative things. My live depend on it.
First, i must say. I didn't spot it in new chapters, yet in old one, even as i am not native English speaker, i could spot some spelling mistakes.
I could ask you, where are you from, but it is an internet and i am not in power nor want to know it like my life depends on it.
I could also argue, you sometimes jump to much with a story. Of course, Author-Chan, you are a writer and overseer of this story, it's your decision. But sometimes, it was a little to much.

And even if you are an author, i can offer you one simple scene to write.
As nations on Earth learned about SK, one might create a wiki side for it. Someone official, public writer or... a weeb? IDK.
Yet, this my offer a way to write some minor details about SK, Supreme Beings, Vassals or even world itself.
And someone might react to it. For example, Lady Esdeath?
Just saying stuff... :3

Also, thx to you, i am willing to start writing my own Overlord Crossover. And tips for someone to start or how to get a deeper inspiration?

Anyway, if you didn't get bored reading this, well...Good. At least my review got notice!
Keep you with your work oblivon2991 3
And i must of course say it
Faster! Faster! How long i have to wait for next chapter xD

Wrote: SzrEdeR
PS: Of course if you spot some bad english in it, please don't kill me. As a Polish reader, i can miss something. Getting your mistake spotted make you do it less.

Estoy impresionado. Sigue siendo el mejor fanfic que lei suerte y cuídese ️

I still dont know how this Khan and his army is supposed to have that strong magic powers that can even rival Sorcerous Kingdom Army. Did they come from another world? If they are natives of this world, their magic should be much more weaker.

If at the end of the story both gate structures are destroyed I think Ainz should gain some special power or steal Hardy ability to create new gates that can connect different worlds. Sorcerous Kingdom should have something similar to the Bifrost Bridge from Asgard of Marvel that allow them to travel where they want. Just imagine Earth countries reaction to that OP ability XD.

Also can see beelzebub having the electric powers of black lightning and static of dc comics and the powers of cole macgarth (good and negative karma powers) from the infamous series. That being said, please upload the next chapter as soon as possible please.

And that is how Belzebub made Giselle part of his end.

man hope u update soon

Please update soon.

Hunter x hunter and overlord are not written at all! Please write one!