Reviews for ReTurn of Jasper Whitlock |
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![]() ![]() ![]() doesn't he mean Badgers |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the premise of the story, but i feel like you hsve missed the mark a little on Hermiones character. she isnt this irrationally angry all the time. i suggest a beta to help you smooth out some rough edges |
![]() ![]() Someone is helping them along |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the update. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() tow very lovely chapters thanks ever so much, I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() are you going to be using Hale? or Whitlock? for Jasper's last name? |
![]() ![]() Is this a jasper and hermione pairing |
![]() ![]() ![]() another lovely chapter, thanks ever so much, I love it, love a good jaspmione story, I just love this pairing it's a very rare pairing. thanks again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading these two chapters, thanks ever so much, I love it. I've never read a story like this before, but it is lovely. thanks again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what a lovely two chapters, thanks ever so much, I love it,and I can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You should also do one about Harry and mpreg every time he bottoms. |