Worse story that i read in a while

Pretty damn good.

Interesting idea, hopefully you'll come back to it someday.

update this please

Another review: Although I'm a bit confused...wouldn't Kurama heal Naruto's eyes? Shouldn't he have his sight? I mean, I like the fact that there's repercussions for what happens when someone who doesn't know how to transplant an eye does transplant an eye, but Naruto does have the Nine Tailed Fox to heal him. Other than that, I really do like the story and would like to see where it goes!

This is really good! I love your writing, too! I can't wait for the next update!

Hi your idea is great nice writing but u forgot two things regarding naruto healing factor n healing factor(Kurama)...how cn he take two chidoris n heal without scaring mind u and then get eyes and fail to see dont be stupid...the is a two to six months between the arc leading to the war you could hve used that as a way to get him atleast 4paths without makin him look super O.p

that was good keep the chapters coming

For an attempted takedown of a self indulgent schlocky story concept, you've certainly failed to actually write a story that can hook people. This is just equally contrived in the exact opposite direction of the nonsense you're railing against.

"How complicated can it really be? Blood, wow, lotsa blood. How much of this nerve do I need to save? Fuck it, I'll just plop 'em in the hole." -Konan, O.D.

This story isn't bad, but I'm having a hard time getting into it. Slow progression that's kinda vague and likely tied into plot later in the story, but not a lot of anything to catch the attention in the now. Other then Naruto's bum eyes. And brooding. Thanks for the story.

Okay, Madara can just go rub a cheese grater on his armpits, that asshole.

"I make due", should be "do".

The mathematics of EXPLOSIONS! Hell yeah.

It always jars me when I see, like, time-travel Sasuke kill Itachi and cut out his eyes and then there is no problem getting them implanted later, or similar with Naruto and anyone with cool eyes that the author thinks would be neat.
Point being, I'm glad to see non-medic nin swapping eyes having serious, tangible effects on the implanting process.
Good story so far. :)

good Chapter man

Awesome chapter