Reviews for Betrayal
monsterkillers124 chapter 6 . 7/16
Is the story still active or is it abandoned was just wondering
Hendrie9870 chapter 6 . 5/17
i love this tsunade.
it was a great chapter
Genesis09 chapter 2 . 5/16
Wow, this is so far off from canon and it’s only the second chapter. Props to you. I like the changes so far, Anko and Kakashi being younger, though I don’t like them as a pairing even temporarily. Orochimaru is still in the village which is an interesting change. The removal of Dan may cause some issues but as a result only Nawaki died in the Third War so Tsunade might not be happy but she hasn’t turned her back on Konoha. Jiraiya didn’t let himself get consumed by his grief and stay out of the village, so while he’s not necessarily taking care of Naruto like he’s supposed to be, he is still around. Though it’d be nice to see Jiraiya step up after this incident and take custody of Naruto, as his officially assigned godfather by Minato and Kushina the council can’t stop him. I’m already enjoying the story and can’t wait to see how it goes from here. I’m off to the next chapter.

-Genesis09
AnaklusmosRage chapter 6 . 5/14
I fuck with it. Maybe I’m biased but I couldn’t find anything wrong with it. Excited for the next chapter.
SSJDark Drakus chapter 6 . 5/6
I LOVED this chapter, I love the cute family moments between them, especially the mother like scenes with tsunami toward naruto. I cant wait to see more, good luck
ClassyUlysses chapter 1 . 5/6
Or even better Kurenai since she’s only like 3 or 4 years apart from Naruto age. A love triangle between kurenai Anko and Naruto. Anko realize that she is jealous and wants Naruto but is she to late?
ClassyUlysses chapter 6 . 5/6
So there’s kinda a betrayal in 3rd and 4th chapter but not really too big. I can see that she went to The snake Sensei and left Naruto since she wants to be a strong ninja but relished that she totally forgot about Naruto, Anko chose Kalashi over Naruto then she became heartbroken later one. There’s tons of options of what this “Betrayal” can be?

I don’t see them getting together until the end of Naruto or the beginning of Shippuden once the trust and forgiveness foundation established.

Tbh idk why Kalashi chose Anko? He always wants to be alone and focus on combat? So it’s kinda odd to me.

If you make it more interesting make a love triangle between Naruto Anko and Hinata or Ino because Anko can be jealous and see that she missed her chance because of her choices that she made so the guilt and regret she’ll feel is pain and suffering

Hopefully everything resolved for Anko and Naruto for future chapters. Idk if you are publishing these chapters on a weekly or monthly basis.
arckane chapter 6 . 5/5
The betrayal is gonna be Anko fucking Kakashi and cuck naruto gonna be crying
Guest chapter 2 . 5/3
Wtf? I had to stop after the 100 shadow clone, 200 rasengen attack, that shits beyond silly! Its one thing if he say drove a rasengen into the ground in front of them and sent the flying but to use 200 rasengen on three civilians? Laughable, further it doesn't even really hurt them! He could have just literally smacked them around a bit hell his killing intent alone would have probably made them shit themselves and pass out.
jh831 chapter 6 . 5/2
Good story so far.
Im curious about when the betrayal will come and what it will be.
herart chapter 6 . 4/29
Well, this is different. Maybe not for Kakashi fans in the future. So... here Kakashi won't be sensei because he is just 3 years older than Naruto. Also for his age he wasn't involved in the last war or said war hasn't ocurred.. Obito and Rin are young too. Sakumo is alive.
Banjo the Fox chapter 6 . 4/29
Good update, I suppose. Still rather dull though, no blood retribution either.
hendo2031 chapter 6 . 4/29
nice chapter. keep up the good work. looking forward to more.

i wonder if shizune will possibly have a big sis role in the future assuming that she was/is/will be tsunade's apprentice? or if anko will be tsunade's apprentice instead of orochimarus? i wonder what types of things orochimaru could teach naruto? depending on what type of person he is? i wonder if/how much naruto will be taught medical knowledge? i think that naruto could be taught jiraiya's chameleon jutsu. since what happened to naruto, he could use that jutsu to hide if he were to feel like he was in that situation ever again. or in jiraiya's mind to teach naruto it in order to have him help jiraiya conduct "research". it'd be funny if naruto were to use the chameleon jutsu and get caught by anko and that is how their relationship started.
draculyn28 chapter 6 . 4/29
ok another good chapter, greetings.
PkmntrainerCam chapter 6 . 4/29
*Kyuubi no Youko/Yoko* and Welcome back, fam.
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