| Reviews for Trouble |
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  Jonsie chapter 2 . 8/19/2018 Are there any more chapters coming? |
 StefanieWildermann chapter 2 . 8/2/2018 Please continue with your story |
| GrammyIda chapter 2 . 3/30/2017 Poor Sharon, even after she divorces Jack she and their kids still get pulled into his crap. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 Ouch, the Jack-Ass is back! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/29/2017 "Jack the Trouble"! |
| Amy chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 There's a recurring error you may want to fix for future readers, as it's distracting: Jack borrowed money, not lent it (the person who loaned it to him did the lending, he did the borrowing). |
| Battgirl2 chapter 2 . 3/29/2017 Jack is a complete nightmare. Great story though keep writing |
| Leauh2o chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 Intriguing start A few typos ( we all have them) Interested to see where you take this |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2017 Good start! |
| michelle cuevas chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 i love this story, please continue want to see this story as a continuation. |
| Amy chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 This sets up an interesting dilemma for Sharon - does she handle this as a cop or as a mother (in terms of whether she pays off the debt, or goes after the loan shark)? I'm curious to see where you go with it. BTW, in case you want to fix it, the phrase is beaten to a "pulp," not a "pope." |
| Battgirl2 chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 Keep going loving the start of this story |
| ProfTweety chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 Of course Jack would find himself in trouble with the wrong kind of people. At least he gave Sharon a heads-up about the threats towards Emily and Ricky. |
| Virgil chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 Great story line. Jack is such a loser. I thought it was great that Andy and Rusty stood back, and Sharon ran the show. The last few lines showed their moral support. Well done! |
| HeiBeSo chapter 1 . 1/27/2017 An interesting beginning and I am looking forward where this story will go. I hope Sharon is able to save the kids but without paying for Jack's mess. |
