Come on! With so many stories out there, and with how this website is made off of taking something that already exists and making something else out of it, it is near impossible up with something completely original. Besides, chapter length doesn’t matter as long as make sure the story is still there, which is something that you have done wonderfully. Personally, I am often thinking up variations of stories as I read them, which is nothing to be ashamed of and is instead a wonderful part of telling stories. It is my favourite part. All in all, you are a wonderful author who needs to keep on writing. I hope you’re talent isn’t wasted.
This is my reaction to the review.

I love the story

Wait is this one up for adoption this wording was kinda confusing. I hope it is not up for adoption

hmm

Hey, that reader is wrong. Being a writer myself, I know a few things. You are an amazing, budding author! Your stories have twists that others don’t. Chapter lengths are allowed to vary somewhat in consistency. I have no idea what’s wrong with some readers, but you can’t listen to them! Keep up the good work )

The main difference between you and that reader is that you actually made the fic they couldn’t be bothered to, and that makes them jealous

Besides a few grammatical errors, this story was going great and I hope you change your mind about leaving this story.

Sincerely,
The Crimson Storm

I'm sorry to hear that cause I happen to love your stories its a real shame and their rotten to do that to you or anyone else for that matter..i hope you feel happier someday and continue writing for people like me and more importantly like you..er sorry got a bit carried away hope you feel better

The Guest who wrote that review probably has no idea how to write a story or how hard it is to just figure out ideas and then reveal them to the internet, I mean just a class essay is bad eneough but showing millions of people through the net, that takes courage! So, how do you think Rick Riordan deals with this? He has his books published around the world in many different languages, and how do you think that he deals with hate comments? I mean, not everyone is gonna like everything you write, but you take those comments and see if you can improve from them! It’s just the way the world works. I believe that you can do it and continue writing.

Your stories are masterpieces that should be looked at by the anime and movie studios for each franchise involved and made into spinoff anime and movies that bring said scenarios to life. those so called "guest" reviewers don't have a creative imagination whatsoever and their way of compensating is to bash the stories of the truly great what if story authors.

Go to Wattpad, and find the username 'Shizukiro'. Read 'The Four Guardian's', 'The Four Guardians: Hoenn League', or, preferably 'The Four Guardians: Rewritten'

Basically, Ash and Pikachu help Latias revive Latios, the they get turned into a Latias and Latios in that order.

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Please continue

I don’t know about any one else but I love this fic. Even if the concept has already been done you put your own spin on it and that’s what matters. Every piece of writing has inconsistent sees one my favorite book series had a major plot hole a Main character had faked their death and in the next book the The person had a friend come over and the friend wasn’t shocked at all about her being a alive. What I’m saying is you can write really well. :)

I'm sorry you've had these horrid comments; your stories have a lot of potential and just need some smoothing out. Don't let anyone tell you your story 'sucks', it doesn't! It just needs some tweaking. You're an amazing person with amazing ideas! Have an great day!

I'm sincerely upset that you deleted that story. I really enjoyed it. Now I have nothing to read on a regular basis.

Several guests don't make accounts on purpose, so that they can't be identified. They can also spam hate that way. Don't take it badly.