This very good

Kaito is hungry, wants to eat

Aaandddd oof. The mercs are going to realize how big of a mistake they made

I'm bad at reviewing but I love the story. Hope you pick it up again.

Harry should go straight to the Prophet and tell them Dumbledore is the one who entered him so he can get Harry under his thumb and challenge Dumbledore to swear a vow that he didn't put Harry's name in and if Dumbledore doesn't and instead weaves some lines then call on the MoM to charge Dumbledore with attempted murder and point out Dumbledore can easily clear his name by making a simple vow.

Something tells me Dumbledore stole Harry's blood, wouldn't be surprised if some was used for the GoF but he definitely used some for tracking and monitoring i bet.

I agreed with the previous comment

This is fantastic

its was good right up till he got kidnapped by remus.
the rest is pure shit! *sigh* smh.

you started off good, but you cant have harry be a badass to everyone but dumbles. it makes no since. dumbles might be powerfull, but he's a pussy who cant kill, Harry is a killer.
killers aren't afraid of shit. he should be plotting on killin dumbles. what he said to delacour about killing comes to mind.

Can't wait for more chaotic harry

Just found this story and love it. I hope it isn't dead.

Please update bro.. I am eagerly waiting for your update

Hello, I wanted to tell you how very much I have enjoyed reading this Wonderful story. I will be looking forward to your next update. Until then, Thank you for sharing this story with all of us and take care.

PLEASE UPDATE

I’d assume being the head of the Peverell family, rare as that seems to be, would likely bring a fair amount of scrutiny from the same sorts who would be after him if they knew of the cloak. Hopefully Harry has a plan and you bring in some more interesting sorts of OCs to throw him a bit more conflict on his level.