I really like your Fanfiction and I hope you will Update soon.

I'm sorry but I don't like it. It's more like Hunter than Barry. I mean it screams hunter
instead of Barry. Sorry but that's like taking a cute kitten and Turning it into a murderer.

very interesting... Looking forward to seeing where this story leads...

I like this story, can't wait to see more

Keep going dude amazing story

kool keep going