So happy that Sherlock is finally here! I absolutely adore that man. Especially since it's played by Benedict C. I think you're a good writer but at the same time I don't think you need to go into so much detail about her makeup and outfit in each chapter. Just my opinion. Can't wait for next chapter

I can't wait fro her to see Sherlock and realize, hey, he's the one I saw with the blue eyes! Will be waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!

This is honestly still really good. Often romance stuff loses me with the first chapter or so, but not this one. This means that you're doing good! :D

Ok, first off, this is amazing so far! I don't normally read this sort of thing, but I got curious. I also didn't spot any major mistakes. Good job!

oh i loved it! i am so waiting for the next chapter!

I LOVED IT! The girls aren't all nice and sweet! but they are real and savage! that is how friends talk! loved it! anticipating the next chapter! plus the food made me soooooooooooooo hungry!

grt build up ... good characterization ... i enjoyed reading it

We don't really get a lot of idea about the storyline, and ChocolateSauce18 (whatever) is right, you could certainly improve upon your expressions. Hope this story turns out to be amazing️

Nice work

It's much better than before but it does need a lot of work. Your spelling is fine however you need to focus on more detail and punctuation. I need to see more personality from the characters. I'm not trying to be hard on you, I just want your story to be amazing. You should try and get someone to edit for you, it will make a major difference.