Wow this was different than ur usual, as Noctis was the only one that had to care for Prompto all by himself. It was very amazing, my favorite scene was at the last when Noctis almost cried for his friend :") Thank god Prompto is ok and the others reached at the last moment.
Well done

Youchhh. Yeah I'd be freakin out if i had a stick brushin up on my insides, too.. And poor Noct. Always sucks when you try to make a situation better and only end up making it worse...

Hang in there guys. Why is it always worse than it appears with you Prompto? Either way you always pull through, so don't give up. Awesome flow all the time with your stories!

EUGHHH CAUTERIZE THIS RIP IN MY HEART WHY DON'T YOU
blegh okay i'm good. i'm ready. Let's do this.

You really enjoy seeing Prompto in pain, dontcha?I can't say I didn't too. Poor him.
It was a nice take I really enjoyed. Thought that they were true to themselves and all in all credible. Also, I'm glad you kept it realistic. There is a limit to withstanding pain especially when one isn't trained to tolerate it, and you kept the physique realistic. All in all, nice job.

Aww sweet conclusion! All in all a wonderfully written story, absolutely loved it! You put so much effort into it, so great and so happy you wrote it.

Thank you for taking the time to write the wonderful masterpiece :D I quite thoroughly enjoyed reading it!

Wow... That was amazing!

Ah I just love these two (I mean I love all four of them but these two are special to me) and seeing Noct try to care for Prompto is so sweet.

Part of me secretly wishes this was in the game, I loved the story! :)

Awww so sad it's over now. Such a great story!

I really love it :-)

Another wonderfully written chapter, my hairs stood on end while reading it was so good!
You write Prompto and Noctis so well, glad this fic is focusing on them! Excited for the next chapter! Thanks for updating so soon again :D

omg I knew that there had to be something wrong but I thought somthing might have happened with his rib. But this is even better(Or worse when you are Noct or Prompto xD)
My side hurts in sympathy, that can't feel nice. Wonderful new chapter!

Damn... This is so intense! And so well written.

Oh man... :o

That sounds very very bad... I feel so sorry for both.
Poor Prompto - this must be an aweful pain...
And poor Noctis too! I would have no idea how to deal with such an situation :o

I really really hope the others will find them soon :/

Thanks you for the great chapter. Hope the third will follow soon :D

Whoa... What's wrong with him?

OOOO it's so GOOOD! Literally hanging on to every word in this story :D

Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for updating so quickly!