Reviews for Disremembered (Alternate M Version - Chapters)
dianesnyder chapter 3 . 9/22/2017
True, Zeke will not mince words. Very nicely done, sounds like how 2 guys would talk.
dianesnyder chapter 2 . 9/22/2017
enj412 chapter 3 . 5/2/2017
I just love Zeke. Glad he is being a good friend to our guy.
Bamcn24 chapter 5 . 4/8/2017
Finally! I think that the string was perfect and totally within Tobias' character. You did a great job with this story! I couldn't stop reading it until 2:30am last night. I loved it.
Bamcn24 chapter 4 . 4/8/2017
I loved their sexy time!
Bamcn24 chapter 3 . 3/30/2017
Oh boy, the sex talk.
Bamcn24 chapter 2 . 3/30/2017
Oh my
SomeOneNew54 chapter 5 . 3/30/2017
Once again, thank you for sharing your beautiful FourTris story and being so deligent with the delivery of updates. You are definitely one of the BEST writers. I hope you write something new soon. I will most surlely read it. Thanks again!
psp340 chapter 5 . 3/29/2017
LOVE. IT!
leek812 chapter 5 . 3/29/2017
This was a beautiful well deserved happy ending.
silevanilolav chapter 4 . 3/22/2017
Awe..
leek812 chapter 4 . 3/22/2017
Thanks for the M version. I left my review in the T version.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2017
Before, I said Tris should stay and stand her ground against FourNita. Now I am hoping she does leave for Providence. It would definitely hurt her if she run into FourNita while Four is under one of Nita's spells. We all know how affect Witch Nita is with her demonic injections of "vitamins".
Guest chapter 4 . 3/21/2017
Did she not hear the words he was saying? Granted I'm glad they didn't do the deed without both feeling the same thing. Loved the chapter. Looking forward to Teis processing what just happened. Also looking forward to everything being exposed. It sounds like it is getting close with what Tobias has heard from his team and it being different from what Nita has told him. No more "vitamin" injections for him.
psp340 chapter 3 . 1/28/2017
I'm so glad he's realizing things are not as they seem! I was worried there for a bit!