As much as I love and respect the council, they best be reuniting my child with her clone brothers bc she needs them. They will love her and I will probably continue to cry anyway, but love is good. Asryn needs that.
'Twas a fantastic chapter. Have a wonderful day!

Well. After such a relaxing Spring Break and a lot of tine spent hanging out with friends, this was a slap to the face. The sheer amount of emotion, the constsnt reality checks for Asyrn, and a powerful ending to the chapter, you did a marvelous job!
I guess it can be overlooked that you were a bit late... perhaps... can't wait for more!

This is amazing! I envy your talent with writing, you do a wonderful job portraying characters, emotions, and placing details perfectly. Count me in for the long run!

The battle is interesting. I wonder what happens next :)

You managed to catch me right before bed - very good timing on yor part. This is very, very well done - the pain she feels at first her injuries and then her master's passing is palpable. I still haven't forgiven you for killing off kobey, by the way. But it looks as though he'll be sticking around in spectral form, so hurrah!

The speed with which it went from emotion to utter control was breathtaking. Hungry for more.

Utter tragedy in the first chapter. I appreciate that very much. I adored Kobey immediately - and now he's gone! You're going to put us through 134 chapters of undiluted angst, I'm sure. *applauds* do carry on. 3

This gosh darn better not be a oneshot, because it's been 831 words and I am emotionally invested in this story now. My little twi'lek child better be okay, okay? I will adopt her as *MY* padawan if I have to, even though I'd be a terrible master. Please, just let her and her clone brothers be okay. Please.

A brief start but an intriging one, good luck!

This sounds like a great story. Can't wait to read it as it comes along!