I apart from these other reviews love B613 plot. I am in love with Charlie too... so seeing him as a main part of the story is great. Btw Olitz isn’t my OTP they’ve obsessed over it, I get it, that’s a big part of the show, but I care for the underdogs. Charliquinn is my life, and George Newbern is my heart.

It would help if you made it clear whose perspective was being told.

This was a good little story! Well written, and paints a good picture. I think the only thing I'd offer as a suggestion is to clarify this is Olivia telling the story. I read the description, but I still forgot it was Liv, until it got to the Quinn part, I was like wait, what? Haha. I'd forget my head if it wasn't attached though, so there's that. All in all, I enjoyed this.

No one is talking about the plot between Olivià and her dad that no one likes either... People love the Olivià and Fitz relationship and that is why they watch this show and why scandal lost 50% of their viewers when they broke up last season... but you can write about who you want, no one asks not to, its just that you shouldn't wait for reviews cuz you wouldn't get any... People hate b613 plot, and jake and papa pope with it it destroyed scandal we all fell in love with and they dont give a shit about quinn, Huck or Charlie. Good luck anyway