noted...looking for to the REMAKE _

Got it

Your right about the desert fight, but it really wasn’t a big deal. Sad that your rewriting this though. The grammar mistakes were easily ignored.

You're wrong you're a great writer and I really love this story

It is good that the news was not about saying that the story is abandoned, I have to agree that you made roland too powerful, I also hope that in the rewrite you have the wing zero working as it should, since you did have to activate the zero system, when in the case of wing zero it always has the system active, and it was only the sandrock when the system was installed, which had to activate it.

While I think you have a very good point in rewriting the story, you also need to work on your spelling. A lot the the words are misspelled. One word that drove me nuts was how you spelled the word picture. It's spelle E. not pitcher. Your spelling it like a pitcher of water. Just some advice and trying to help you make the story flow better. Poor spelling subtracts and detracts from the story. It is a good story don't get me wrong. Take it or leave it.

Hey man you do whatever you feel is necessary, I'm sticking through with this story until the end.

I get is true about the typos and all that. Is a bummer that we have to wait but is for the best and what you think make you feel better also ask operation for some tips and also i dint like how roland became strong and damege wing zero like that with just a guiz model it took millardo to damage zero the loes nor the other suits did too much damage to zero also can you have the big guy have more more will like partialy alive and and moves the suit more also. Will heero friends will join on the seed verse

You do what you need to do man.

Good stuff!

Love. :) Sorry never got the update it updated till I check. Love oh Love.

great chapter, I liked how it goes sincerely it seems fair to me that heero acts in such a way with this version is not yet the so human of endless waltz, but his personality of perfect soldier of the series, if I remember correctly in a previous chapter you decided to make Lacus learn to pilot mobile suit, it is possible that she receives freedom instead of kira, considering that lacus is a pacifist she would use a fighting style equal to that of kira when he possesses freedom, while kira you could give the YMF-X000A Dreadnought Gundam, which is based largely on the strike in appearance, which would be more suitable for him, especially if you can prevent Kira from going the same way as the canon.

i like the story and hope for an update soon.
keep it up.

Amazing work

Come on, do another update