When I saw the film I really didn't see a pairing in Newt and Queenie. But you really pulled it off perfectly. I love it that you made the scatterbrained Newt practically confess, so adorable. Your writing style is also great to read and really draws you in. You made me want to read more on the pair.

Oh this was so terribly sad and sweet. I really enjoy Queenie/Newt, a lot more than Tina/Newt, so this was great. I thought you used the OTP Torture prompt very appropriately and made it into something that could really be used as canon. The ice dragon was a really neat addition too. You described both characters beautifully, especially Queenie in her inappropriate robe!

There were some grammatical errors and sentence structuring that I would alter. One thing is that you seem to repeat "-ish" quite a lot - red(ish), grey-ish, blue-ish - there are many other descriptive words that you could use, maybe try focusing on the darkness or lightness of the shade, or consider using alternate named colours for describing eyes and hair, such as 'cerulean', 'stormy grey', etc.

Overall, I have no other critique. This was a very lovely read! Well done.

Sophie xo