Late to the party, I know.

Though in all honesty - I didn’t really mind the ending that much. Could it have been better - oh absolutely. But, saying that, I personally don’t know how I would’ve improved it.
Maybe that’s telling of myself, but it’s the truth... It’s all I can say really.

Loving your work so far.
Keep it up.

Till next.

I love DxD stories that don't suck on the Devil's Dicks. I've always been fond of HFY stories where Rias is denied a tool, sorry - I meant "friend" for her peerage.

Ice cold with sugar and i love arkos maybe third fav ship or second and loved this

amazing chapter. I can actually see this happening more than the team and friends abandoning jaune.

Well as is tradition. Fuck you

Damn, this one was bittersweet. Bitter for Pyrrha and Sweet for the rest of her old companions. This was a really well-done chapter. I loved the introspection of her own character and actions. All so believable and gives a glimpse of what could have been.

I hope to see more character-building heavy chapters like this one. I greatly enjoyed this chapter and hope to see more like it! Until next time!

Amazing story

This, I like this, it's good

OK, just confuse.
Is there a reference to this story?

Would it be possible to give all of the chapters a title? Makes things easier.

First thought for this was about Raven. She left Ozpins group because she became disillusioned to Ozpins manipulations. I'm this I could imagine the same but Ravens a regular mother who left Taiyang and became sane but now has a restraining order on her keeping her away from Yang. So much potential.
Raven- Normal person
White Fang- Idiot Furries
Weiss- Trust fund girl blowing dads money
Schnees- Just regular oil/dust miners who sent deranged daughter away
So much more could be done with this.

This would be a good full story. Would genuinely enjoy reading it, if it ever tickles your fancy.

Would be cool to see this one as a fully fleshed out story if yet he muse strikes you.

I'm loving there shots so far, interesting and different. Also I've been on a bit of a Jaune/Nora story hunt for a while so this was a God send to find. Something different and I hope to see more along with other in the following shot you give us. So far the Odin and Ruby seeing the difference between Older brothers to sisters are my favorite. I look forward to your next update.

Loved the wiess x jaune chapter
But what happened to jaune?
Did he kill himself ?
Or is he alive and are his children ever gonna find him?