| Reviews for Mind Wrapped |
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Crow Jones chapter 13 . 3/19 An interesting premise done well. No part felt like it dragged and the story was well written. |
Adc15 chapter 1 . 2/1 and also really liked your writing style and all. thank you for writing this 3 |
Adc15 chapter 13 . 2/1 You should really make a sequel in the future.. its really that good. |
DanaGone chapter 13 . 6/6/2019 Now that I read this fanfic I ACTUALLY SHIP THEM TOGETHER. THIS IS SO GOOD THANK YOU |
Jerichoyuy chapter 13 . 4/6/2019 Loved it! |
SofiPhan29 chapter 12 . 1/20/2019 A true masterpiece. |
Panther-Strife chapter 13 . 1/15/2019 Please please please make a sequel to this great story. |
SofiPhan29 chapter 13 . 12/24/2018 AWESOME story! Really 3 |
Ordalie Gwynfyd chapter 13 . 8/30/2018 I read your 3 endings, it was funny because at the first I thought "Oh, it's good", at the second it was "oh, it's even better ! " and at the third it was "omg this one is the best!" You did a good job here :) Anyway, I liked the idea of Paulina understanding that what she's doing to Danny is wrong and trying to change. It was well written and the characterisation felt real. (And I feel like Delphine was just shipping the two and therefore decided to fulfill the wish just for them to finish together (I can't really blame her)) |
Dianasaur101 chapter 13 . 8/10/2018 I really liked this story. To be honest, I'm not a shipper of Paulina and Danny, but I loved the way you portrayed her. I am glad you decided to keep Danny unaware of the switch (while it was happening). You kept me interested, so thank you for writing a great story! |
Hatred bear it Fangs chapter 13 . 8/6/2018 Awww this is just so cute. Honestly I appreciate Paulina realizing what Danny does and how hard his life is, but finding out the way she did make it seem like she was in love with his ghost side only or did it because she knew who he actually is and not his you know actual... well yeah. It would be interesting if you did another where Paulina fell for Danny Fenton hahaha but to be honest, I always adored this couple. It is weird as I never really did like DannyxSam. I'd even prefer DannyxPaulina or DannyxStar. Sweet story though and I'm going to read your other one, although something gives me the feeling I've seen it before |
Sonic Squid chapter 5 . 7/26/2018 She was a Fenton, he was an a-lister, can it get any more obvious? |
Kakerot Bardockson chapter 13 . 7/3/2018 great fic, I usually don't like Paulina & Danny but you did it beautifully |
Asj Johnson chapter 13 . 4/20/2018 Really nice fic. I loved reading it. I like that you mentioned your thoughts on how to do the switch. What you decided on was a unique approach (from your cover image, I thought there'd be a Danielle and Paulo, but it was interesting the way it ended up). Also, you mentioned an Aladdin episode... just curious, was it "Two to Tangle" with Mozenrath or "SandSwitch" with Sadira? |
A cool dude chapter 8 . 2/5/2018 Im scREAMING at Paulina the fuckin diary SAYS "got Ghost powers" I MEAN |