Well done so far it's pretty damn accurate to where Terumi is still the foul mouthed man that he usually is. Not to mention that his growing desire to be free from Nine and Amaterasu does play a good role into the story. As for the timeline I would not worry about it too much as Terumi would say there are multiple timelines in the boundary this is just one of them. Anywho it just depends on how you present like for my story a Nine who is from a different timeline actually married Terumi if you can believe that. Other than that keep up the good work.

Well done. Descriptive, fitting for the featured characters, and actually entertaining. Glad there's another rare good piece in the Blazblue section.

Holy crap this stories great! You really did capture the characters well and I don't think there is a story in the Blazblue section that really focused on the Six heroes and the dark war so this is great. Keep up the good work and I hope I see more from you.

Well, let me just start by saying how nice it is to see a story like this pop up for a change. Finally something different, and with an interesting concept. The Dark War is actually one of the more interesting parts of the BlazBlue universe, so its nice to see someone expanding on it. It was well paced, and Nine was pretty well characterized, but as usual Terumi is the show stealer. He was a funny jerk as always, but I love how you kept him menacing despite his massive disadvantage. No way Terumi would so easily bow his head to someone like Nine, so I'm glad you kept him so defiant. Also knowing there this will ultimately be heading puts a different spin on Nine's attitude to me. Its almost tragic with us knowing she doesn't stand a chance as she digs her own grave.

As for the timeline, eh, there is only so much you can do. Kokonoe would have to be conceived and born sometime during the war. Personally, I would guess she is out by the time the 6 Heroes face the Beast, but I know it isn't a very big window to work with.

All in all, nice job. I hope you continue for the sake of the BlazBlue section if nothing else. Lord knows the section is desperately low on quality these days.