Reviews for PokeAngels |
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Krika1119 chapter 40 . 1/7 Definitely liked the story. But have you ever thought about doing a sort of series that are sort of alternate endings to some chapters? Like a "Bad End" series where the bad guys win. |
spanky1988.ajw chapter 33 . 11/6/2019 Can't wait for chapter 34! |
Blue Dragon 77 chapter 23 . 6/10/2018 I have one question; why isn't this called Episode 19? That is the format you've been using up to this point. |
Blue Dragon 77 chapter 16 . 3/8/2018 Also sorry for the obvious screw-ups in this, My phone has been acting glitchy a bit. |
Blue Dragon 77 chapter 16 . 3/8/2018 Well it's a great story...just with some slight grammar issues, point being using past tense words in place of present tense words (ExDid you already "had" a bath?when it should be (Didn't you already have a bath?) or something that works better (Didn't you already take a bath?) Not a bad story by any means, just try and use words that stack up in the tense they should be used in. Other than that, a very solid story, and I can see it going far, just throwing my two cents in here, hope this helps. Warm Regards~ Blue Dragon 77 |
A Fanfic Guy chapter 1 . 11/19/2017 Ok, um, yeah. This whole thing was an F-up. It was good fanfic, but VERY disturbing. Even for me, a 27 year-old pokemon fanfic guy. But I give it an A for the story. Keep at it GamerKid |
Jay Thunder chapter 1 . 6/15/2017 Nice story. |
Savage the Raichu chapter 1 . 2/18/2017 This is good but try making your paragraphs and dialogue more separate so people won't get confused. Other than that this is very interesting keep up the good work! |