| Reviews for Broken Arrow, Slammed Hoop |
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BabyLoveBug95 chapter 7 . 6/17 I love your story. As for people telling you how and what you should write, don't pay them any attention. Write your story as you wish. The way you wrote Kagome makes sense to me. |
KagLover684 chapter 2 . 11/26/2019 I am loving this Jack of all trades Kagome. Please keep it going. |
Coolfire30 chapter 20 . 2/21/2019 Fuck. I have no fucking idea what the fuck was wrong with me thinking that Akashi and Kagome would be a better pair in this story than Kagome and Daichi but...fuck! Sesshoumaru’s a real cunt! I fucking love him to death but fuck! The way you wrote his personality makes me want to claw his face off! Honestly, I really do! Fuck. I need this to be continued and edited, like ASAP! The first chapters were a little cringe...well who am I kidding it was very cringe. But still, I really like where it’s going. But...there is one other thing that bothers me tho...why on earth can’t Kagome just use her miko ki, her status as the Shikon Miko, and the fact that she has saved the world and essentially pull ‘rank’ over Sesshoumaru? I mean I understand that he’s strong and all but...they fought together! And Sesshoumaru is a very honourable demon! Surely his actions were unwarranted! I really need and explanation about why he’s been acting like an asshole. Honestly... this all in all seems very OOC of Sesshoumaru to do. While I do understand that you need a ‘conflict’ to happen, I really don’t think that this is the way to go...unless you have a REALLY believable story as to why Sesshoumaru is like that... Regardless, I’m into this story...as shown by me rereading it, and hope that you return and finish what you started. |
Prince chapter 16 . 10/22/2018 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO |
Prince chapter 14 . 10/22/2018 NO BUYO I WANT A BULLET THROUGH HOJO'S FUCKING SKULL FOR KILLING BUYO |
Prince chapter 10 . 10/22/2018 My hatred of Aomine continues, but the development was solid so I'm a-okay with this pairing and continuing to read~ |
Prince chapter 9 . 10/22/2018 OH WOW. I just thought it'd be some random dude, but it actually makes a lot of sense for it to be Hojo. |
Prince chapter 6 . 10/22/2018 Can't wait for that stalker to come and get bodied by FIVE DIFFERENT ATHLETIC TEAMS. |
Prince chapter 5 . 10/22/2018 Cute friendship T_T |
Prince chapter 4 . 10/22/2018 Kagome is just so OP. I love her. Get that respect, Kagome! |
Prince chapter 3 . 10/22/2018 OH MY GOD THAT MAKES ME SO PISSED. You handled the topic well, but there's current circumstances in my life rn that just make me really want to kill this guy. |
Prince chapter 2 . 10/22/2018 My heart is screaming for a pairing that isn't Aomine (because I hate him), but I can handle well-written pairings with people I hate. Maybe I'll end up liking it, if it turns out like that. I love Kagome so much. I want the best life for her |
Prince chapter 1 . 10/22/2018 Oooooh, fights. Feisty Kagome is a good Kagome. Beat the shit into Ahomine, Kags! |
Coolfire30 chapter 20 . 10/5/2018 Fuck... You know... I honestly shipped Kagome and Akaashi since the start but somehow changed that preference if only slightly to Daichi but... Now that there's hope for Akaashi and Kagome... I'd rather they be together tbh... As selfish as that sounds... |
Guest chapter 20 . 9/4/2018 Sesshomaru can go die in a hole now |