This has been a good story. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I hope you are well and safe in quarantine.

I loved the story and all but why didn't you keep some of them on the same chapter instead of making them separate, it really annoyed me. Plus I was getting super hyped up for the big showdown between vegeta and Sarada. Other than those slow scenes I enjoyed it.

I don't understand why id this rated M? Also good story I like it.

You have to continue this story if u need ideas I can help but this is one of the most well written stories I have came across i am waiting for what sarada goes through next...#best...oc..ever

oh no! yamcha just got yamcha'd!

Kudos!

Hey.. a sudden update.. nice.. hope we don’t have to wait a year again.

Anyway I enjoyed this post. Keep up the good work.

Nicely done :)

Always a pleasure.

I kind of forgot this exsosted...but you did great! I love how you make Nappa more then a mindless brute! Possible 2x Masako reference?

actually in chapter 12 since they had not used the dragon ball could they not have wished goku back on earth? seem like a wasted opportunity to me...

Next time... please let there actually be a next time

If ya wanna do Xenoverse fanfic why not make it where at the end of the future trunks arc in super when future trunks and Mai left to find somewhere to live they were picked up by Cronoa (from Xenoverse 2) and she gave them a place to live since she lived outside of time

What...?
Where's the next chapter?
It was getting good!
NOOOOO! PLEASE, UPDATE!

This story is awesome!
Sarada is a pretty nice character, and when you talk about pairings, a femslash with Caulifla sounds nice, or another female OC Saiyan. Hey, there could been dozens or hundreds of Saiyans who were off planet, you honestly never know.

But I have a question, do you think that since you've already incorporated Dragon Ball Heroes tie-ins with the confirmations of Chronoa and all thems existences. Do you think you could add some more timeline messes once Trunks shows up? Like how Towa and Mira timed Bardocks trip to the past after Frieza blasted him so they could take him and turn him into a Time-Breaker, you think you could add in ideas similar to that?
Like adding in Fu, or Cumber, or even get some Goku Black Arc changes once or if you get that far in.
Since you've confirmed that Heroes is canon to this fanfics continuity there are THOUSANDS of possible ideas here. Time-Breaker Bardock is just surface level. But for him to be here, you'd probably have to revive current Bardock, which you don't seem to be doing, or even hinting at doing. But still. Heroes is basically Fan-Service Heaven. There are no limits!