Reviews for In The Grey
aaapplexxx237 chapter 6 . 8/17
Your work is amazing!
zeroimpulse000 chapter 6 . 4/9
Awesome more
dess123s chapter 6 . 9/19/2019
I love this take on the story, I hope you come back to this one day :D
readthishit chapter 6 . 7/6/2019
ah, and there they go. im curious how the league is gonna react to this, surely they'll realize at least SOME of the xenothium is being used to power his suit. now where had X run off to? and more importantly, are speendy and x gonna be crossing paths anytime soon? and what about cadmus? so many questions, so many possibilities! personally, i feel like the league is gonna figure out who X is and where he came from before X makes any progress towards finding his way home. assuming it's possible, poor robin. im super super curious what everyone is gonna think of X, specifically why he's different from their robin, and why ANY robin would resort to theft instead of immediately seeking help. ah, i expect a lot of angst from that. wonder what everyone would think of X's versions of them, if they'd be disappointed or horrified, or if they'd be sympathetic and understanding of their alternate selves choices and actions. also oof, yeah adulting suck, especially when you need a job, or just money in general. i bet college isn't helping with that, assuming you're gonna attend it. anyways, best of luck with writing! i look forward to reading whatever you put out, whenever that is! i am just so excited to see where you take this and what you plan on doing. good luck with everything!
readthishit chapter 5 . 7/6/2019
lmao, don't get too cocky red x, or else you'll jinx yourself and get caught by superman. i doubt you could teleport away from him easily
readthishit chapter 4 . 7/6/2019
interesting change of pace, but probably a good thing? it's unique, very few writers give personalities to the goons or the random security
readthishit chapter 3 . 7/2/2019
like father like son, lol poor alfred. pacing seems a bit quick, and i think it'd be interesting to see how X is spending his days in between the alt dimension research
readthishit chapter 2 . 7/2/2019
im surprised X stuck around, but i suppose once a hero always a hero. it's interesting to see the contrast between his definitely criminal activities with his heroic, almost playful actions while helping his alt self. maybe not even grayson himself is immune to dick graysons charms lol. still, i imagine batman is going to start poking around now that X is appearing. maybe he's gonna run into everyone sooner than expected?
readthishit chapter 1 . 7/2/2019
an interesting set up, and we're already heading to gotham? than can only bring trouble. im curious how robin, or should i say X's, personal feelings will cloud his judgment on this. if robin learned anything from his last experience as red x, toeing the line of good and evil and doing what you have to can really come back to bite you in the ass. will it be enough to push robin into crossing a line as red x as he repeats the same mistakes? or will previous experiences be enough to keep his head on his shoulders? i imagine not having HIS team there to ground him might cause long term issues, especially when he runs into the young justice team. looking forward to seeing hiw this plays out! a good start so far, so many possibilities, so many questions, and so many ways things could go wrong!
pooptroup chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
I love this story please keep updating it!
Silver chapter 6 . 6/10/2019
Wow this was amazing!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/25/2018
I like this story
I hope it continues
Dossypet chapter 6 . 11/25/2018
AHHHHHHHHH! so good! I hope the league had interactions with Robin er Red X and is like what do you mean we're jerks? PARENTAL UNITS UNITE
PandakaiLove chapter 6 . 9/26/2018
hey awesome story! when are you going to continue
Opalalchemy chapter 6 . 8/22/2018
A thought occurred to me, what if Slade got caught up in whatever sent Robin to the YJ universe. Slade runs into the League and makes a comment about his "wayward apprentice Red X" just because he gets off on making Robin's life more difficult. Also, where in the timeline is this taking place? After Tokyo? Before?

Is Rob-er-Red X's homesickness going to lead him on a path toward lil Gar and M'Gann?

I really like where you are going with this. It's a more original take on Robin becoming Red X in YJ. You convey your fight scenes very well, making it easy to visualize what is happening. With a bit more polish I can easily see fight scenes becoming one of this fics biggest strengths. I do recommend going back and editing all your chapters. A lot of sentences stop mid word or aren't complete and I have to guess from context what was supposed to be said there and sometimes I have to reread several times to figure out who is saying what. There are also numerous misspellings. A quick spell check would help with most of that. Also, in this chapter it would be "whether" not "weather" when GA is telling Speedy its no use looking for Red X.

Congrats on your high school graduation and good luck with adulting. Adulting sicks a lot of the time but the freedom that comes with it is more than worth it.
118 | Page 1 2 3 4 .. Last Next »