Sweet baby Jesus, things are heating up!

College gets easier with time. I hated doing essays, too, but those will also get better.

I admit that this chapter also wasn't your best, as you've clearly stated, being so short and sudden. But I still like your story. Gaia's interactions with everyone and how she acts, speaks, and goes about doing things is very intriguing and not as angsty as other OC-oriented fics are. I look forward to another chapter whenever you're able, but always put life first!

It’s so exciting to see a new chapter! And a new perspective, too! Kimblee is the character I most love to hate in this series, so to get a taste of his perspective from your story is - as he says - magnificent!
I hope your classes are enjoyable, even if you’re tired from working through them!

Me reading this after working 10 hours straight on my college work: wow same issue.

This was a nice chapter to read after a long day and a need to unwind a little. My brain is fried but I got itnall. Your simple action here was good and the sleepiness was well balanced. Thanks :-)

dude it's your fanfic if you think mudding alchemy would be more fun to write than go for it.
Personally I think fanfics that kind of walk away from the story can be hella fun to read.
But all in all just write what you feel like would be fun to write about or even just something you wished the series went more in depth about and write your story about what you feel like it might have been like if they did.

It’s your story, so go anywhere you want. I like the interactions Gaia has with Ed and Al. They can geek out together. Can she meet Izumi? Also, I love your AU with her as a Hohenheim. Thank you for updating!

...okay, I personally did not see anything 'wrong' with this fics tone. However, I understand loosing motivation for a fic. I'll send you a PM with a few plot bunnies.

i say do what you want to do. it's your story and the laws of alchemy are hard to deal with. i don't mind them getting a little muddy :) can't wait to read more though!

Is this story dead or can I hope for an update?

I love this story. The writing quality is fantastic.

Finally found what I was searching for! A story where the oc interacts with other people than just the main characters, and doesn't just follow them around. I really like Gaia and the story so far. Looking forward to whats happening next!

It's very nice, thank you

This is a really good entertaining story. I really like the fact that you're not just copying Canon script and adding your new character to it, as most authors tend to do. I'm really interested to see where you will take the story next, maybe even Roy and gaia will become friends.

ooh boy. i just found this, but i love it and can't wait to see how messed up things get. so i hope you update soon! :)

I think the best moment of this chapter is how Gaia has to practically drag Roy back to his home. Colonel lightweight