why not make a NARUTO X RAYNARE X AKENO X RIAS? more tempting as we say more we are crazy more we laugh

If not good start
When will we continue?

muito bom mesmo.

Magnificent chapter can’t wait for more please update soon

Really interesting, but I'm curious how Raynare will fit into the picture.

If you continue the story, that is.

Dear writer please make more chapters

Dear writer please make more chapters

really great idea . interesting concept please continue

Interesting. Nice pairing.

He seems a bit nonchalant about death of innocents though. Sure, few drops in the ocean, but nevertheless.

And he seems awefully week. Then again, he was probably far from going all out?

Cheers

Dear writer please make more chapter

How about an familiar? Great to be anything including, mascot (of sorts), useful for various ideas and fill in the plot more to be easier than fillers/character development. Example: Since this is DXD have the familiar turn humanoid and constantly/mostly grabs a certain body depending on the occasion (chest, half hug, rear... etc). Familiar sure beats talking to people and therapeutic sessions for mental and spiritual/emotional stability.

Finally got around to reading this one, while it has nothing to do with Ghost Rider (as a Marvel fan, GR sucks on occasion, he is a cool idea and a cool drawing but is usually a bad comic book) the story is very intriguing. I think if there were more than a dozen Fiend left this would be a very interesting "Side Story" to the DxD main story, kinda like SLASH/dog (which actually came before DxD).

While well written a couple of problems do exist, mostly is Naruto's uncaring attitude, he kills a bunch of people with zero emotions other than 'My bikes and achieves nothing more than making me dislike Naruto, it harms the idea that he is 1) in the right for doing what he is doing and 2) he is a over all good guy. While getting their (Ghost Riders) power from a demon unless they are skulled up, are usually very caring good men. Add in that Naruto's hellfire is in fact Kurama's Chakra, and the un caring demon aspect kinda falls off. Reduce and move the class report on some things like Fiends and his Immortality and the Abyss. In fact we shouldn't even know what Naruto is hunting until he starts seeing the black boney body and gets whipped with a tail. Essentially that whole break down of what Fiends are where they come from, his immortality, his job all that breaks the most important rule of story telling where you Told me stuff, you didn't show me stuff. Plus the "Master" stuff wouldn't feel like an ass pull after the whole "Fiends can't stand to be near each other" which is why I feel that part is badly done.

hmm not too sure about this one yet though I do like Naruto with raynare please write some more chapters pretty soon.

Good start, though Rias running to her brothers is out of character if sencible choice

xD lol freat chapter keep it up

This is so good please update as soon as possible this story is fireeeee